loved it. had a seductive tone to it. love the chemistry between eriol and tomoyo. intrigueing. you should make a few more chapters with it. would be an awesome story.

Eriol is acting like a playboy. lol. But if he really is serious about Tomoyo...this story deserves a second chapter. :) I'm alerting this just in case.

original and good. really good! keep up the good work~ :D

*laughs* Oh, Eriol reminds me of someone in that fic. Are you planning on continuing, or leaving as a one shot? I think it deserves a second chapter!

lol i loved this story! great job!

Haha... very funny. I enjoyed it.

Make it a series?

ahahahahaa niice :D

this is pretty amusing i think its funny how every1 makes Eriol look like a playboy its so funny

cute! hahaha! especially when I thought that Eriol was going to kiss her... love that part! haha! keep writing! Very sweet!

-Amytis-chan

jaja! That's the Eriol i love!! jeje, poor Tomoyo, she didn't expect that, altought i would never refuse to go out with Eriol.
Good one!
Malu D.