that was beautiful
it was so sad i cried
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I like it, and it almost made me start to cry... Then I got confused. I thought the kiss was the only thing they had, then Mello went into denial.. But now there were night spent hand in hand under the stars?

You also switch between first person and third. You might want to check that.

:)

Good, nonetheless.

Your sensitivity is awesome...Which is the only reason I like it. Normally fan depictions of Near tick me off because of how often he lacks the edge and cockiness that he has with dealing with things. But your sensitivity in doing it was really striking..

The previous relationship Near mentioned with Mello I didn't like as much...but the sensitivity drew me in again. *eyeroll*

i love it!
it's so sad yet
beautiful i really
like it...
T-T i love it!

I teared up, but I will NOT cry because of a fanfiction!
That was really good.

Aw this was very sweet in every sence,I loved it! *hugs* I think I liked Near's recolections on how they met the most ^^ it was so cute ty for posting it

Gosh... That was wonderfully written; I really felt what Near was feeling in this fanfiction. This is definitely one of my favourite Death Note fanfictions.

-sniffs-

I'm touched. Really, I am. Even though it's in character, it's out of character at the same time. Like I care about that, though... XD (Like I'm one to talk, anyway. XD)

~Salsal

I know its a Fanfic, but it's extremely out of character.

And you do know that Mello is a guy right? You make it sound as if they were gay.

Wow, I absolutley loved this story. It was in character, yet at the same time not; which is what fanfiction is about, right? I would have wished it was a little longer but who am I to talk? Great job.

Even when I knew those three words were coming, still tears welled in my eyes when I read them. This one is a heartbreaker.

Oh...
This one made me really depressed...
But I liked it nonetheless.
And it was a li'l funny that Near kept remembering how close Matt and Mello were xDD, was he jealous or something? xD

oh ... *start crying* it's so ...*don't find word* so ... beautiful and I really love the fic, it's... so cute *cry*

aw! *begins to cry* WHY COULDNT MELLO HAVE LIVED!?!?!

*sobs*
*wipes out tears*
so sad..