Overall I liked your story. It was mostly very heart warming. I just don't understand why you chose to write the ending the way you did. Sure, it seems like an act of nobility, but protecting Luna from harm is, in this case, also denying her the love and happiness she quite obviously seeks from Harry. It is ultimately a self-undermining nobility.

That said, I enjoyed most of your story. It was good.

I liked this fic. I love luna and harry together but honestly I have to say my favorite part was your ending line about how harry knew why he was going to save the world.

Good story, but I was really wanting Harry to let Luna know his true feelings.

Aw. That was I adorable!(:

I love Luna/Harry.(:

Of course I love Luna/Draco as well. And Luna/George...actually I think I love her with just about anyone. (: XD

Great story!(:

I just love this story...just can't decide if this ending should be the end of it.

I'll add it to my favs & Haruna (Harry/Luna) community

Thanks for sharing your story!

While I always take the time to read, I also take the time to review a well-made story. This story is unlike other Luna/Harry story I have read. While in other stories Harry and Luna get together at the end of the story, this one doesn't have that too-often-used ending. All the parts of the story contributed to a great ending. I especially liked how the dream affects the ending of the story. I think one of the best moments is the last two lines of the story. It is your writing so I will not copy it, but it is extremely inspiring. It gives a new angle to the ongoing Harry and Voldemort conflict. This was a great story and I hope you write more stories in the future. Magnificent job on a great story!

Really great story, I did like it very much - still I'd have preferred if Harry had not been so bloody 'noble' in the ending.

update soon

gah! stupid boy, just ask her! god damn.

i highly enjoyed you story, but it made me recall a friend of mine who did the same thing. "just friends" yeah right.

Pretty cool. I thought you handled the build up to the intimacy quite well.

Not bad, epsecially Harry being upset that he did not know it was Luna's birthday. I was rather jarred by some of the character references and circumstances and it raised several continuity questions for me.

Cool beginning. The whole thing with "The Sock Drawer" nearly made me wet me pants. Funny stuff. Caught a couple spelling mistakes. But overall a good start.

please write sequel! I want to know what happens!

Great Story. I really enjoyed it.