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yumeniai
2008-06-13 . chapter 1
how sweet...it's so cute...
Now Accepting Visa
2008-04-23 . chapter 1
I think, in this occasion, if just this occasion only, it is perfectly fine for me to do this:

"AW."

It's a pleasant change from the romance-y CainxRiff stuff I've been reading lately. Though, if there were one thing I could change, it would be the use of the word "butler" so many times.

Other than that, I love the description. The line, "...Cain looked up into the calm blue eyes of his best friend and butler..." really stood out to me.

Keep up the good work! :3
TrisakAminawn
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Strong friendship! Right! That's how it is! M...not half bad. Really too bad Riff doesn't push Cain around just a little more. Nice job with Mary. Who's the dead person in question? Meridianna?

XD By the way, in your summary you misspelt 'pairing,' so instead of saying that you liked seeing Cain and Riff romantically involved, you said that you liked cutting small bits off of them.
Sorryll
2008-02-06 . chapter 1
This was great! And...I KNEW THE SONG! *dances* I havent listened to it in forever but Dido is SO good for song fics! This was lovely ^^
Xx.Foaminians.of.the.Future.xX
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
aw that is so cute
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