 Now Accepting Visa 2008-04-23 . chapter 1I think, in this occasion, if just this occasion only, it is perfectly fine for me to do this:
"AW."
It's a pleasant change from the romance-y CainxRiff stuff I've been reading lately. Though, if there were one thing I could change, it would be the use of the word "butler" so many times.
Other than that, I love the description. The line, "...Cain looked up into the calm blue eyes of his best friend and butler..." really stood out to me.
Keep up the good work! :3 |
 TrisakAminawn 2008-04-21 . chapter 1Strong friendship! Right! That's how it is! M...not half bad. Really too bad Riff doesn't push Cain around just a little more. Nice job with Mary. Who's the dead person in question? Meridianna?
XD By the way, in your summary you misspelt 'pairing,' so instead of saying that you liked seeing Cain and Riff romantically involved, you said that you liked cutting small bits off of them. |