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| MIB 2008-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseSQUELS! Beautiful, it really is unexplainablely good, how you put it in the order and how he fall in love with her, and she falls in love with him (though it was a little earlier then him I guess I don't know) it's quite beautiful. Thank You From: MIB |
| DcDreamer 2008-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome as usual Nessie! Only one thing I noticed, you typed four as six, you should correct that. And so I give this five stars! Please keep writing, fanfiction and Nejiten will not be the same without you! Sayonara! |
| Kieren 2008-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this, although they're just vignettes.:D |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is very sweet expecially to Neji's reaction to Tenten's pregnancy. The way you ended it was very suitable for Naruto. Very good! |
| MissRule 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuse...I don't think you're capable or writing a NejiTen-fic I don't like. |
| RoaringTiger 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! The fifth part, I think, was the best! Keep it up! |
| Roses of Sharon 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really good! The format was a bit confusing - I think it would have been better if you had put an extra space after the numbering, and an extra before, but still, very good! |
| Quiet Moon 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuse-sighs- I like this. It doesn't have too much of a genre, or too little. I especially liked vignette number ten. -snorts- Irritated Shikamaru and absolutely surprised Neji. Yes...who did hire the bad musician for number eleven? Was it the idea of one of Neji's nutty relatives? Even Hyuugas have their strange moments. |
| Decritic 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a wonderful story ;] Practicing your smexy writing skills hm? xD I enjoy reading your stories. they are very entertaining and very well written ;] keep up the great work. *two thumbs up* |
| nothing but blue 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abusethat was absolutely beautiful. i loved it. even though each vignette was so short, you managed to make it its own story and world. great job! i really enjoyed reading these. hope you write more soon! :D |
| Shikyo no Amatsu Shinsei 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseit was really sweet! :D anyway, good luck with the competition. :) |