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| The Legend of Soul Emblem 2008-01-22 ch 1,  | abuseNicely done. I think you got the characters right. Although I'm more of a fan of the Greil Mercenaries. It would be cool if you could make some more of these. Support conversations should have been in RD. It's one of the best things of the series. |
| Gaurdianangelzelos 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseNot a bad short and sweet story you've made here. Did a good job showing the unity of the Dawn Brigade. All I probably would have hoped for was a little more Sothe (though that might just be because he's my favorite character) XD. Keep up the good work. |
| qwertumz 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAh, that was heart-warming! I, too, adore the Dawn Brigade and can't help but prefer them over the Greil Mercanaries so many times. They may not be as experienced or as strong, but I just love the way they interact. A true family. Your wording was nice, and you did keep them all in character. I liked it very much. :] |
| Lethe Laguz 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseAh, the characterization was excellent. I, too, felt FE10 was lacking in character development but you managed to keep the characters in tune with their basic personalities while giving them some much-needed depth and rounding it out with some nice details and realistic dialogue. Kudos : ) |
| Aquatic-Idealist 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseAh, agreed. The characterization in Radiant Dawn was far below par with those ridiculous support conversations. You've done a nice job. I ought to take notes. For a first fic, that was superb! |