Great story. Ugh I wish that was how it happened on ths show! You captured the voice and the characters so very well! This was a wonderful, wonderful piece and a lot of fun! Thanks!

Line that made me laugh?

"Let me rephrase my statement. Maybe it wasn't blown out of proportion enough."

And in regards tot he second part: I love it when Bill's thinking that life is good.

Thanks for a fun read!

Hey! I didn't know about the updates! Sorry! My favourite lines in this one:

"She knew that part of their behaviour was induced by the alcohol and drugs they had consumed during the night. Mainly the behaviour that consisted of them making out like teenagers.

But at the same time, there was not the tiniest bit of doubt in her mind that this was what she really wanted. Had wanted for a long time."

I think that was a lovely take on what her thoughts would have been. Thanks for posting!

Oh this is my favourite, I can just see them sitting outside the tent smoking and chatting, lovely image. Plus Lee and Kara's reaction was great. Really enjoyed this thank you.

Beautiful chapter. That was so cute! Lee and Kara's reactions were funny. The coffee thing was nice, as was the 'which victory are we celelbrating' part. I love this chapter. Nice job :D.

Cute. They're making out like teenagers again. Baltar seeing them was interesting, but I think he was too distracted by Six to dwell on it long. Roslin and Adama are so cute together. Nice job :D.

This was delightful. You did a great job of creating a light-hearted, warm moment between them!
Thanks for sharing!

Bill get a clue, she is draped all over you! Little bit of flirting I'd say! Lovely chapter, Cally trying to pull her husband along was great and a little bit of Bill and Laura action too!

It's quite funny that people keep stumbling on Bill and Laura's activities. Finally Bill gets the hints she's been dropping all day. Their 'make-out' session was cute. Tyrol's 'Get a room' was funny. I look forward to see what you have next. Nice job :D.

I think I have reviewed this chapter over at SI but I love this story and thought I'd tell you again. I really like the idea of see their relationship through others eyes.

Loved Ellen's cattiness! Laura's thoughts were well done, too, and her making the move of spooning against him and then waiting with suspense to see what his reaction would be was perfect. I'm looking forward to reading more!

I love this story. I really liked the episode and wished that they had done more with it. I'm interested to see where you are going. I like that Laura has been dropping hints and that they are snuggling together. Ellen Tigh was funny. Nice job :D.

Yup. I like this beginning, and I'm with you totally. Something happened on New Caprica. How could it NOT have? I'm looking forward to reading your 'what happened next'!