I love this chapter. I like the simple, panicked equations that Alice does when she is trying to peace everything together and, above all else, I like that she has a normal scared reaction to the notion that the people around her are blood sucking, killer vampires! Can't wait for more!

Wow... Wow. That was amazing! Truly amazing. It's very well written (like always). When Alice found out they were vampires... now that's the reaction I was waiting for... Twilight on the other hand...
Anyway, great job and I can't wait for more!

If Jasper doesn't kill Edward, I will.
Yet another example of how skillfull you are at writing. If I want to kill a character that the actual author established as amazing, and don't feel like there has been a loss of "reality", you are doing a fantastic job.
I'm glad you split the chapters.
That means I get two more.
Feel free to split again.
Always a pleasure to read.

Hello. I'd like to apologize for not having reviewed previously. Let's face it, I've read this whole story and liked it enough to put it on my favorites list (it is a phenomenal story, by the way, and if you have any nonfanfic stories, I'd love to read those.) but I haven't ever cared enough to review. I'm trying to turn over a new rock and have started reviewing. If it weren't for ** like me, I'm sure you'd have gotten so many reviews you would have gotten fed up with them and quit this whole site, so maybe people like me served a slight purpose, but it was still rude. Sorry to have slighted such a great story, and I wish that there was some way I could improve it, some advice to offer just so I felt like I contributed to it's awesomeness a little. But I got nothing. Great story.

Wow, Alice is really freaking out! I love that! If vampires are suppose to be so scary it's funny how nobody in SMeyer's books acted really scared of them. I can't wait for more!!

This chapter was kind of annoying with all the "_ equals _" but I'm happy that Alice finally knows everything.

Now it's time for Jazz to make it better, i hope.

epic. and dear lord, about time she found out

Awesome chapter

I like the shifting Pov's in this chapter, it added to the disjointedness of it all, which was perfect for the mood. Good job. :o)

Hooray!
Thank you for updating!
Edward is being a monster! Poor Jazz... he's really messed up right now. Loving Alice's dreams.
Thank you for such an amazing story, can't wait for the next chapter! :]

It seems like Alice is finally going to find out the truth about Jasper. I hope. Great chapter even if it was a little bit confusing.

damnit edward! i hate this version of his character...

great chapter though. loved how you used the cullen vs whitlock analogy

Yay! An update! I loved this chapter! I love seeing through Jasper's and Alice's and Edward's eyes. Though I really, really do hate Edward. I wish he went with Jasper and died.

I can't wait for the end but I'm going to be sad that it's all over! I'm getting the suspicion that it isn't going to be happily ever after. Just as long as Jasper and Alice end up together (even if it's in death). I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, wow. Interesting! Great chappy, I liked it very much.
Soon you'll be the queen of cliffhangers ;D
Great job as always!