I like it.

I luv it. Throughout the whole episode it seemed like Colby was hidding something, like he had a deeper connection to Bonnie.
I love your take, and wish they had done something similar in the show. =)

It was a good episode but a follow up after Bonnie was rescued would have been interesting. I really like your add on to it. Great choice of place and atmosphere.

That was great! I still can't believe she didn't thank him at the end of the episode! Thank goodness for your story; I felt like this was the ending we should have watched. It was brilliant!

thank you for a very nice story. I agree that Colby wsa brilliant in this episode. I loved the way he helped Charlie face his demons- the whole episode was great.
I look forward to other stories you will write- thinking positively now! Hint hint!

Quite honestly, I don't remember this episode..but all the same the story was really well written. You seem to have Colby's character down.

I like it!

Wow, girl! Very, very good! I know there is something else behind this case...I think your explanation is as good as any, but your writing is far above.:)

Always,
Kas

great job..

Good explanation. I really thought this is where they were going with the episode, but it turned out to be something else. Still, I like the way you filled in the blanks!

I liked it! I skipped over it at first because it isn't what I normally read but I am glad I went back to it!