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| cip 2008-09-25 ch 1,  | abuseOverall a great story! engaging, and full of just the right amount of mushyness to make me all giggly :D just one tiny pointer on the lemon. It was very well written, but since it was Mai's first time it would have been quite painful for her to start with. However, it flowed really nicely and probably better wihout that, so just a little heads up for the future :D |
| natsumeluvr 2008-08-25 ch 1, | abuseo! ive gotten to love LinXmia...and this story was so cute! please write more! it was soo good! |
| TheMan123 2008-04-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYO you should make a sequel and add parts to it like lin banging mai in his office on his disk and then the SPR gang walk in in the middle of there sex |
| MaiLin29 2008-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my...*faints* *comes to* You win. I'm serious. You just frickin' WIN. At like, EVERYTHING. |
| Rena1 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI have to tell the truth: I'm not much one for the Lin/Mai pairings, but you wrote the characters and emotions so well that I'll let it go this once. Very beautifully written. |
| hiya24 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseLoved it, also loved how Naru reacted, that was good :) |
| Otaku Nayami 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abusethanx, well im not a lin/mai fan but i decided to read it anyways and it was really good! im still a naru/mai fan though ^.^ i cant wait to read the sequel to 'Sweet Dreams' :D ~Nayami~ |
| Ayjah 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI think you handled the lemon well (not my favorite aspect of a story by far) and though not my favorite pairing you sold me on it for this story :) Thank you |
| Kyia Star 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuse...I guess I got your email a bit too late. ^^; But! But! This story is just made of AWESOME and WIN. Thank you so much for writing it for me! (Now I have to finish chapter ten, right? :P) |
| edhel espyn 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseNice story! I like how the story developed, you know, not just straight to the "deed". Hey! I want my birthday present like that too! *poutypout* |
| ecyoj06 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abusewow... another Lin and Mai... although I love Naru and Mai it feels odd at times to have a stoic person such as NAru a part of juicy scenes, especially if it's a LEMON but then again Lin is also stoic... but the difference is... it is easier to see Lin so passionate and heated than that of NARU... I wonder how and NAru would do together? *shivers due to the thought* i think i'll pass... thankyou! |
| derawr 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! LinMai makes my day. :D |