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ManriiArisu
2009-11-14 . chapter 1
.. LOL. I don't even know why, but this made me laugh so hard. Plus, X27 is absolutely amazing, and you did a fantastic job with it here.
Friglit
2009-10-22 . chapter 1
Oh epic WIN with this! I love Xanxus and Squalo's messed up realtionship, and the dry narrative just about ended me "Xanxus, in his emotionally retarded equivalent of declaring eternal devotion, throws something at Gokudera’s head". XD
yumeniai
2009-09-27 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHA
Oh, so that means that Squalo's Xanxas's bestest, bestest friend in the whold wide world, and if he even thinks of leaving Xanxas he'll die a long, painful death??
Or all of the, 'fuck off right now', 'stop talking fucking nonsense and fetch me more alcohol' and 'you are my bestest friend in the world, never leave me'?
HAHAHHAHA
Whaetever, just LOVED the Xanxas being 'cute' part ...
Seriously, there has to be something wrong with Tsuna...
BUT THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED HIM WAS SUPER CUTE!
Ek...
ok, i'll stop rambling...
Riznao
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
Totally loved it!
Though at first I thinked 'WTFOMG a fic of Xanxus and Tsuna!'
It was worth clicking the link so anyway great fic keep the good job!
hoodoo80
2009-09-10 . chapter 1
lolol! This is so hilarious! Cause you somehow manage to make Xanxus serious emotionally deficiency adorable, which quite frankly, nigh impossible. And then Tsuna, Tsuna! He's so sly! Haha! Oh man, that was fantastic. I love that this was all in Squalo's point of view, cause I don't think anyone else could have given a better view point of the story. And that pretty much all the guardians, except for Gokudera are aware of Tsuna's feelings it's so amusing.
pamellka
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
EPic XDXDXD
yoru-anime-yume
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Hehehehe, Poor Squalo. Tsuna is definitely the residential uke. X3 Great job on the fanfic! :)
gadez
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
you are the crack-master! ...no wait, you are the crack-GOD! i worship each of your crack fics!
Hirakareta
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
This was so cute I don't even know how to explain it >,< Favs!
Dysgrammatophobia
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
This is genius. You have some amazing one-liners and just the right flow. It shows some serious talent. You knew exactly when you wanted people to laugh and it shows. Great job and thanks for sharing.
ireadtoomanybooks
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
LOL Love it XD X27 ish da bomb!
Renleek
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
Oh wow.

I am BLOWN AWAY. This was one of the best and most hilarious KHR fic I've ever read. Oh man.

Your Squalo POV of Xanxus x Tsuna is beyond brilliant. I love the pacing, the violent sarcasm, the slight Guardians x Tsuna implications and DAMN but most of all, your perspective of the "unique" Xanxus/Squalo friendship.

And yay for the emotionally retarded Xanxus! Your talent gives me a vision of you writing a long epic story of them (gets shot for writing down shameless wishful thinking).

Thank you! You made my day!
Kitty Meow
2009-05-22 . chapter 1
LOLOLOLOL! XD A simply MARVELOUS story! It was ingenious to tell the entire thing from Squalo's perspective (who is so often ignored). And despite the fact that it was Squalo matchmaking (two words I believe should probably never be placed in the same sentence), it was still remarkably in character and a hilarious read to boot! Ahaha the budding romance of X27! And I believe that part I liked the best was that everyone was remarkably in character! There were so many parts of this that I just loved to bits, that unfortunately I can't quote them all here <3 Everything thing from Xanxus being described as "a hermaphrodite snail with MPD" to having "cutely tore open the man’s windpipe with his teeth" XD Oh ILU! And of course what I loved best was your translation of Xanxus' chosen projectile into varying degrees of "affection". Pure. Genious. <3

Thank you very much for sharing this story with everyone! I will certainly be adding it to my list of Favs *sparkles* Can't wait to see what else you write!
Deeper than Darkness
2009-04-30 . chapter 1
Haha... poor Squalo...
tweekthetwitch13
2009-04-22 . chapter 1
Not lying a bit when I say this is my favorite X27 piece of fanfiction. No, no.. I'll go further. My favorite Reborn fanfiction to date. There are some that are longer, more in detail etc..but I enjoyed pretty much every single line of this story. I know for certain I'll be rereading this a number of times out of pure adoration! You've made this fangirl veryvery happy!
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