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Reviews For: Jumbled Thoughts

Lerrinus
2008-08-04
ch 1,
abuseAww, that was cute! Love the part where Levi joins in, great work nailing all personalities! :-)
Nicole
2008-06-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseAs i read this script, i could imagine them both...playing the scene in my mind. I am a HUGE fan of sue thomas and quite frankly..the first time i read this page, i simply thought it was a summar and began looking for the episode...if there is one...this one...i would like to watch it. this is an acceptional job and wonderfully done...right down to the twinkle in jacks eye and levi scratching at the door. If this is in a video or a link to where i can watch this...please forward it to me...thank you...and once again, job well done!!
- Nicole Marie
Hazmatt
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseI love it!
Give us Peace
2008-02-09
ch 1,
abusethat's so cute and awesome!
lamako
2008-02-09
ch 1,
abuseAhh,, how sweet. It could have been a nice ending of the series.
Please write more Sue Thomas fics.. i'd love to read them.

ps. Had jij trouwens niet veel meer verhalen geschreven dan diegene die nu bij je profiel staan. Ik 'ken' jou volgens mij nog ergens anders van:P

~Laura~
BabyBeaver
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseAw, cute! I like it! Nicely written. ^^
sb4ever
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseNice! I thought the part about the marriage proposal was a little hurried considering Jack's commitment issues and slower than molasses actions but the flow of the story was good. I especially liked the scene outside the apartment.

“At least she hasn’t asked for details yet,” Jack whispered to Sue, when Lucy had disappeared inside. But then Lucy’s head appeared around the corner. “And I want details!”

Sounds very Lucy!
AJeff
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseHi!

This was a great oneshot! Bravo!

Anna
Tashfan
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseGreat story!! Love it!! Hope you write more!!
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