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| Lerrinus 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseAww, that was cute! Love the part where Levi joins in, great work nailing all personalities! :-) |
| Nicole 2008-06-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAs i read this script, i could imagine them both...playing the scene in my mind. I am a HUGE fan of sue thomas and quite frankly..the first time i read this page, i simply thought it was a summar and began looking for the episode...if there is one...this one...i would like to watch it. this is an acceptional job and wonderfully done...right down to the twinkle in jacks eye and levi scratching at the door. If this is in a video or a link to where i can watch this...please forward it to me...thank you...and once again, job well done!! - Nicole Marie |
| Hazmatt 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI love it! |
| Give us Peace 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abusethat's so cute and awesome! |
| lamako 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseAhh,, how sweet. It could have been a nice ending of the series. Please write more Sue Thomas fics.. i'd love to read them. ps. Had jij trouwens niet veel meer verhalen geschreven dan diegene die nu bij je profiel staan. Ik 'ken' jou volgens mij nog ergens anders van:P ~Laura~ |
| BabyBeaver 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, cute! I like it! Nicely written. ^^ |
| sb4ever 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseNice! I thought the part about the marriage proposal was a little hurried considering Jack's commitment issues and slower than molasses actions but the flow of the story was good. I especially liked the scene outside the apartment. “At least she hasn’t asked for details yet,” Jack whispered to Sue, when Lucy had disappeared inside. But then Lucy’s head appeared around the corner. “And I want details!” Sounds very Lucy! |
| AJeff 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseHi! This was a great oneshot! Bravo! Anna |
| Tashfan 2008-01-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat story!! Love it!! Hope you write more!! |