Having a story with a central refrain of making Paul go to a pretentious ‘Hooters’ so to say and develop feelings for a long time acquaintance of his is an interesting prospect for a story. I found myself instantly liking it from the start. Despite my admiration for this story, I felt slightly irritated with the ending. It came off as very rushed. The story gained good momentum, but for something completely random to just happen, it didn’t mesh well with the rest of the story. Ignoring that problem, the one-shot was good. Though your writing could have had more imagery and description to help the story‘s pace. Although, despite these complications, I’d have to say that this could possibly be my most favorite ikarishipping one-shot. Thanks for the read!

Kawaii! :DDDD

Aww! So cute!

Wow, a fanfic which I enjoyed AND where I learned somehing! That was really cool, Keep up the good work!

Wow, this was really cute! /

Very cute, ne! 3

Ikarishipping is cute... one of my favorite shippings! _

I've been to a maid cafe too... and I'm a girl... O_o Is that weird?

aw.. it was really sweet! i really enjoyed reading Shinji's reaction, simply becuase of his cold and heartless reputation. i loved how you captured each character's feelings and personalities and twisted them in a sweet and enchanting way to make me keep reading over and over again. and wanting MORE! if you ever make a sequel to this story, i gaurantee it'll be the most enjoyable, fun felt story of a lifetime!

great story

aw that was soo cute :3

i think that was the cutest ikarishipping fanfic i've read so far!

Isn't it weird how in almost all the ikarishipping fanfictions that take place in the future, Dawns a to coordinator and Pauls a league champion?

I LOVED THIS!

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Aww! Cute! This should SO have a sequel. Just a suggestion though... Hehe...

i love this story!

First of all, great job!

Second of all, I need to ask u some questions.

Questions: R u Japanese?

Do u research how the maid service thing goes?

Did the 'master' made Hikari to be very polite to the customers?

Inside Hikari, is she still her bratty self?

Can they still join in the same region they entered before?

I liked the story. This stayed truer to the characters than many other Ikarishipping fanfictions. One thing I noticed though was that you seem to like changing the tenses. It gets distracting so be a little more careful about that. I'm glad you did your research, it made it more interesting.