Hm...interesting idea. Please update soon. I don't read many HP fics, so please update! I want to know what happens! Thx! ;)

hi there,

I like the story idea and the way you've developed it so far, but you have a fair amount of typos and grammar/editing mistakes there which makes reading a bit hard. I think the whole story would be a lot more enjoyable if you found someone to beta this. Otherwise it's a good start!

Interesting stuff right there, please update this I think it is going to be getting really good soon!

Hey there! Good start, I like the concept a lot, and the title's great. You've got a fair few typos though, and some kinda messy spelling. If you ran it through the proof reader before posting it would be so much easier to read. Looking forward to the next few chapters...

Smart kids. Poor McGonagall. Good will triumph! Great chapie.

very intense chapter! smart girls!

Finish it please, I want to see where this story goes.

I found your story on another site and its really good. keep up the great work and post the rest on this site.
im dying to know what happens

This is a brilliant story, please update soon!

wonderful story! Can't wait to read more!! Please hurry up with next chapter!:)

i love this story and i can't wait for the next chapter!

Wow! Talk about intensity!

:( you uploaded the same chapter as 4 for 5

OMG ! DIE SNAPE! ( he's evil, screw j.k he is )

seems like a good fic so far... might be better if you added some more detail and checked you spelling... just a couple of tips for you...