 AlterEgoSadist 2008-01-13 . chapter 1Wow! Great story! Very deep! Although I've never played Daxter at all, this was filled with so much description, I could actually envision the chase scene! How strange...(Laughs) The ending was superb, but a bit creepy. I actually feel sorry for the Krimzon Guards now! They better watch out or they'll get their butts kicked by a very angry Jak. (Grins) Baron Praxis and Errol getting mad over their captor's enjoyment was (I say) the most amusing part of the whole entire story. Trying to dampen his mood only gets the angrier, heh. Anyways, great story! Keep up the good work! You are a brilliant author! |