A lovely idea. Very strong characterisation, and well written. Well done!

A sad story. I agree with you not quite as good as your other fics but once gain bought me the feeling of curiosity.

Keep Writing

Princess Ducky

I loved this.

It was sad and almost made me cry, but it was beautiful.

Very poetic. I wish I could write like that.

Once again, beautiful.

Wondering What Breakfast Is
~Julia~

There are tears in my eyes!

That was truly beautiful.

xx

Aww. I hope Kitty loves it (or loved it). She enjoys these types of things.

Anyways...beautifully done. Sad, but great.

I loved how the one paragraph was "shame". Just like that.

Alone.


So glad you updated! I love all your fics...so much that I'm going to put you on Author Alert right now!

Also...read "Liar, Liar"? I think it's some pretty good work of mine...although I caught one grammar mistake. I'll go back and fix it later.

Sweetly angstworthy material.

Good theme and execution of poetic liscence over Snape and Lily. Well done.

you have made me thoroughly depressed, which a good thing for this story. this fic was great, it had so much meaning in it. it was really deep and touching. i enjoyed it immensely and your descriptions of the wind and what it's like to laugh the wind were touching. thank you.

Oh wow, beautiful. Your story was simply beautiful and very poetic-I loved it!

It's like a breath of fresh air after reading some of the one-shot fanfictions on here...

Keep up the great writing (:

This is qute a poetic interpretation of the title... I knew it would be a difficult title for anyone to work with, but I think you managed wonderfully. The way you described to "laugh the wind" was very beautiful, very original.

You also illustrated Sev and Lily's friendship perfectly.

I really do love it. :) I'll post this on my profile shortly.

Very nice, poetic too. You've captured the bitterweet irony that is/was Sev and Lily's relationship wonderfully. (although irony isn't the right word to use...)

Wow. Wonderful job with this fic. It is extremely well creafted, and as a result, quite touching. I look forward to reading more of your works.

Aww, poor Snape. I love Snape/Lily moments.