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hifield
2009-10-02 . chapter 4
Wonderful journey -- loved it all.
hifield
2009-10-02 . chapter 3
Love how protective John is of Elizabeth! Sam needs to get home to Jack - bout time someone put them together!
hifield
2009-10-02 . chapter 2
This is my first John/Elizabeth read and it's been worth it. Great story.
hifield
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
Excellent story so far -- really enjoy it. Loved the conversation between Jack & Sam -- sweet.

Especially loved that the city told John that Elizabeth was back -- great start!
bailey1ak
2009-02-16 . chapter 3
All smiles here.
bailey1ak
2009-02-16 . chapter 2
Really enjoyed this chapter. It's all the scenes you wish you'd seen on the show.
CharlieBlue1977
2009-02-16 . chapter 4
This was an amazing story, where I've been reading the first three chapters, over and over again.
More than wonderful fourth chapter as well, with a wonderful wedding at the end.

This really is, what I would have wanted happening on the show. In some ways.

And I saw, you had changed the "Sir" to "ma'am," as I reread chapter 3. Like to forget that too, of course, but calling a female for "Sir," just sounds wrong to me. No matter the circumstances. (However had it been a Battlestar Galactica fic, this would have been just right, as everyone no matter their gender, is addressed as "Sir." Bar the female president, who is addressed as "ma'am" of course. That took a little getting used to. Lol!)

And now I'm off to reread "How to turn the light ON" again.
bailey1ak
2009-02-16 . chapter 1
A very beautiful chapter! Could not get enough of your description of the two!
nogigglingmajor
2009-02-16 . chapter 4
I was so excited when I saw an extra chp. Thanx!
CharlieBlue1977
2009-02-16 . chapter 3
Just want to point out, that you keep having John addressing Sam as "Sir", almost at the top of this chapter. When it should be "Ma'am" or just plain "Colonel." Just thought you'd want to know about this little thing I caught.
Cocoa Girl
2008-09-04 . chapter 3
You are going to update this are you not? Because after 6 months I am starting to wonder. I really hope you don't leave it as is. Because there is much you could do with it.
Cocoa Girl2
2008-05-19 . chapter 3
I do hope you don't stop it here. This is a great story. And I want to know more about this AU. Clearly Elizabeth is in charge of Atlantis again. I wouldn't mind seeing Elizabeth and John's kid play with Teyla's. And what about that nursery that Carter talked about at the beginning, was it approved?
Nalana
2008-02-18 . chapter 3
Now that was simply an adorable story! I really enjoyed it! THank you for writing it for us!
Charmed225
2008-02-17 . chapter 3
:) I love Sparky!fluff!! Lovely and cute!! Liked it very very much :)
Anon
2008-02-16 . chapter 3
Actually, it's nanites in Elizabeth, not Replicators. The nanites are the tiny cell-like machines that the Replicators (like that jerk Oberoth) are made of.

Thought you'd want to know so you can correct that.
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