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bingbangboom714
2008-08-25
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! I swear I thought I already reviewed this. This is in my top 10 favorite fan fictions on my homepage. I just felt like reading it today and I clicked on submit review and I saw I hadn`t reviewed it! Anyway, I loved it! It was so cute with the whole concept of Pam worrying about Jim. Then finding out the family `s thoughts of Karen. And Kayle was the soo cute! You should make a sequal.
ShortySC22
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseI loved this little story! I thought it was really cute how you included Jim's family into it. Kaylee is adorable and acted just like a 5 year old would.
ohwaterboy
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abuseOne word, BEAUTIFUL!
kerber1920
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseVery good and super sweet! Enjoyed reading it a lot.
dancer288
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseso adorable...it was perfect jim and pam...not too innocent, but not too risky for the first date...can't wait to read more of your work!!
maddikinz940
2008-01-13
ch 1,
abuseWow this was fantastically cute. I am now in love with Kaylee. And I wish Jim was my Uncle. You were very into character. This was really really good.
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