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Reviews For: Love and War

ParamourConspiracy
2008-04-06
ch 1,
abuseI have to say that I really do love this. I love it in the way that it connects what he knows after Finny dies and he's enlisted to what he originally thought would come of him, before he ever thought Finny could die. I adore the end, "You are gone./I am gone with you." and whether it was intended or not it immediately brings you to think of how much he lived in Finny, but then it was all just pulled out from beneath him; and using the theme of war to send the message is so obvious. Waah, I really like what you made here. =] Le bon travail.

-Paramour
spider wench
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseyay teh first fic of teh yan-chan. i love it. i remember when you first read it to our class. do you think that i should post mine too?
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