   decision pending 5/2/10 . chapter 22Ok after reading this it's got me all fired up to write my the next chapter of my SM Xover( makoto based of course).
Always an entertaining read. |
| michiriru88 4/30/10 . chapter 6 this chapter is better, not really fast, i thought makochan wanted to see him... its better if things go slow... anyway, i am not that great in grammar, etc too, but i cant help but noticed many grammar and spelling, hope you can fix this someday when you decided to update |
| michiriru88 4/30/10 . chapter 5 hm...actually their is a lot of MAKOTO name out there... i did like the heero and makoto pairing yesterday, and it easily got me hooked, but i guess you did this story a long time ago, like 2001 etc.. so its kind of ah..er...cheesy and fast the first chapter was good though, well, ill just keep on reading anyway |
| dimonyo-anghel 12/13/03 . chapter 22 wha dats so sad and does lina like relena? plz write more heero/makoto ficts! |
| Jovianokami 10/19/03 . chapter 22 Hey great story! Must update soon, okay? And what do you think of making a SM/YYH fic and if you like the idea then could you have it a Kurama/Makoto pairing? I really like it if you made a SM/YYH fic. Please think about it, and if you do think you can make two? Like one is were Makoto is a Fox-spirit and the other SM/YYH fic is were Makoto is a Sailor Senshi. Please send a e-mail of what you think okay? And remember to update soon! |
| JPandS 1/23/03 . chapter 22 This story is pretty good so far. I LOVE IT! Please update soon. Bye! |
| MiLeggie 10/22/02 . chapter 22 I like it a lot! I hope you get the rest out soon! |
| Sorceress Knight 7/20/02 . chapter 1 Hey. I've read most of your stories and they're pretty good but you're in bad need of an editor. If you don't think me to much of a witch after that comment I'm willing to do editing. If you're interested email me
-Sk |
| JupLuna 5/1/02 . chapter 20 ahh too short...but i loved it...please don't have trowa die...i'd cry too much |
| Jupiter's Light 4/22/02 . chapter 19 SWEEEEEEEEEETT! But Please Dont Kill Trowa! :( Please? |
| JupLuna 4/22/02 . chapter 19 I really like this story..but Trowa with a brain tumor...sadness... |
| R.S.A 4/2/02 . chapter 18 please write some more! I have been waiting an awful long time. I also posted my own stories and when you get done updating I was wondering if you could read it and tell me if they are good or not. It would really mean alot. Thanks! |
| allegra 3/20/02 . chapter 18 whats gonna happen next? please get the next chapter out soon! please! i really like it! |
| Monou Hakkai 3/11/02 . chapter 18 Do keep going and BTW, it's spelt DUO and QUATRE. You keep getting the letters wrong for these two ;; |
| Lita of Jupiter 3/10/02 . chapter 18 wow whta a twist I can't wait to find out how Relena nad mako know each other |
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