YAY!! Another chapter! I can't wait to read what happens at the party!! I love how Andrew kidnapped Megan :) I can defineitly tell that they are getting close again!! YAY!! UPDATE SOON!

just found this story last night & loved it... Persuasion is one of my favorites and i do like your take on it. hope you're able to continue with it :)

i like your anne - she's feisty! do update soon.

and btw, i like your take on the JA novel...i mean in making andrew's (frederick) thoughts & attraction to anne obvious.

Goodie, another update. Thank you. I can't wait to read more.

finally, an update. thank you. please update again soon?

I just found this story and I LOVE it so far! I really enjoy how you have the basic characters of Austen, but still put your own twist to them!! UPDATE SOON!

i'm still enjoying your story, and i love the fact that megan spoke her true feelings to andrew...so much better than the hiding behind feelings. though i wish we could have had a longer dance scene between drew and meg.

i must say that i had to go back and read the whole thing because i couldn't remember the story. so i hope you'll return with an update sooner this time around.

do you have a beta? i think having a beta may help you with grammar and also with slowing down the story a bit. parts of the story seem really rushed and the feelings just splashed out at us rather than developing.

your story is great and i love what you've done to make it your own, i'd just like to see the grammar fixed a bit and also less choppiness (if that's a word!?)

thanks for your story :)

I haven't read Persuasion in years but reading this reminds of the beauty and maturity in the book. I hope you continue to update. Its a beautiful story

please update :)

A great chapter!
Update soon.

your story is interesting, i like the fact that it isn't quite following the original.

i look forward to reading where you take the rest of your story and how your characters develop as it goes along.

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the spelling/grammar mistakes are a bit of a distraction, but i'm able to look past them...hope you'll be able to work on it for future chapters.

look forward to an update soon.

I like how you're developing the backstory at the same time as the present day. It's fun watching Andrew and Meg debate. Looking forward to reading more! take care- Req

The one thing that surprised me was when Andrew thought he detected that little bit of hatred from Megan. I wonder why he would think that, or if she truly was hating him (or herself) for a moment. I could definitely think she was hating herself them. Thanks for the update! take care- req

The changes are absolutely fine! It's your creative license. If you really think of it, Jane Austen (amazing lady that she was) left a lot of this story out, so to speak. There are far more descriptions and descriptions of people talking than actual conversation. Therefore I think there is plenty of breathing room. Looking forward to reading more soon! take care- Req

great start! the way you made the chapter titles the lyrics from the longest time was way awesome, and i like the little changes you made from the book :)