I love this, your writing has such amazing flow.

That was really really well articulated, it was amazing, sad, and really moving. You did this scene justice.

That was amazing. Very sweet, sad and utterly beautifully written.

I've read more than a few recounts of what happened in the movie and I like where this went. Very raw and Ennis-esque, no doubt, but yet original. (: Nice work.

"...be glad Ennis felt nervous in his presence, because it meant he felt something?..." Wow, that was great.

Loved this very detailed look into their thoughts. Thanks.

bob

Amazing. If I were to write a Brokeback fic, I would want it to feel just like this. Raw and alive. Simply beautiful

xoxo

YAY! So very descriptive and so very sweet! And very IC! And very.. Just very, very AWESOME! Absolutely wonderful!