How cute! I loved it! -

Luved it. Sweet

oh how sweet. it was so adorable. Good job I loved it! Well bye now! )

That was beautiful! That was just so (sniff) beautiful! Trunks and Mako, YEAAAAAAAAAH!

KEWL! I LUV IT! IT'S SO KAWAII! _

OOOOOOOOOOOO! SOOOOOOOO kawaii! You have to right a big story haveing to do with this it is so adorable, and makoto/and Trunks make the best couple! And yes i will admite that i am a shipper i hate all other /ect.. that feature mako or Trunks with any one else. I am also a sestuna and piccolo shipper! This is soooo Kawaii! You have to write more! There arin't enough mao/Trunks things out there! I absolutly detest Usagi and Trunks fics! YUCK! She is taken married and has a daughter! get over it Darien would never leave her and the scouts would never betray her! Read the maga watch the anime the scouts are ALWAYS talking about how Usagi is there one and only and their soul perpose is to pertect her. Qoute from sailor moon supers s manga mixx # 3 "No matter how many times we are reincarnated out misson remains the same"*Than you see a pic of USagi! Sorry i tend to ramble but i just had to make my point! O yes and Makoto, and Trunks 4 EVER! Ok *Ja ne* now!

Makoto-chan

ADORABLE! I loved the whole thing! o)

LmOl. That was great. I hope you do a story, 'cause Makoto kicks major BUTT!

That was soooooooo cute! Where's the story Angel-chan? I need it!

i engoyed it but i also envy Trunks he gets any girl he wants and the one i want doesnt even notice me unless i'm that f- pig P-Chan. oh well at least then i get her bed and bosom ahhhhhhhhh. But I would like to find one of these Z-Fighters and be trained by them to that i may kill that damned Ranma Saotome!

awh, how KIWAII, I love it keep writing. And y did u stop there, hurry with the next 1

TTFN -watermama

good! very good!