I must say that Tezuka giving sex talks has got to be one of the most hillarious things eve! Poor Inui!

Really nice. I like it.

I'm glad you posted this.

It made sense for the Data Pair to include data and predictions when talking about what happened with their parents. Moriko probably couldn't understand it while Katashi could. Maybe Renji got the data thing from him. With the Data Pair being data collectors, it makes sense for their children to be focused on data. I wonder if the kids would start making those toxic juices, too.

I knew Inui would end up poisoning someone with his juices. I bet he felt bad for doing it to Yuina, and I knew Yanagi would be worried and angry about it. I wonder if their kids would start making those toxic juices, too. Those juices should be for the Data Pair and Fuji only. Maybe the Higa players could take it. He should know by now why people didn't want to eat his cookies. It's also like him to give strange names to his juices.

Yuina seems pretty capable and independent already. Satoru's behavior with the beans was cute and funny, very typical of little kids. He's going to be hard to handle, and Yanagi is spoiling him.

I thought the Data Pair were going to tell their parents about the situation before they started high school. After all, how did they get through high school without relying on their parents? Besides, during weekends and school breaks, when they went home to their families, wouldn't one of them have to take Yuina with them? It would be impossible for them to get through jr. high and high school without seeing their parents.

I also thought people could get married when they turned 18, not 20. Did the Data Pair and the parents just wanted to put off marriage longer?

If they had to see Yanagi's family 10 times every month, it would mean 2-3 times a week. How are the Data Pair and their families going to arrange that with such tight schedules? Moriko and Inui's father remind me of Kunikazu: very traditional, narrow-minded, and controlling, also often jumping to conclusions.

I didn't expect Inui to get overprotective with his family, but I guess Yanagi and the kids have changed him. Oishi's worrying could have rubbed off on him years ago. Yanagi going into a rage was funny and seemed OOC, but I think anyone would have gotten mad if someone kept fussing too much over them. That scene made me laugh. I also like Captain Yukimura's part in it.

You portrayed Captain Atobe well with looking down upon a "peasant's party" and sending so many gifts in a limo.

I knew Sanada and Captain Tezuka wouldn't let Captain Yukimura and Echizen drink the juice. It makes sense that Echizen couldn't handle the taste.

I guess Inui could say that he was buying the pregnancy kit for his wife. I think Yanagi and Echizen could have said that they were getting it for friends.

I'm not sure I've left a comment on this story before, but I enjoyed the entire thing. Renji is one of my favorite characters, and data pair is one of my favorite pairings. I must admit, the idea of Renji pregnant is a bit strange, but he seemed to cope well with it. He does seem to be becoming a bit of a housewife, but I think it's understandable. It's also really cute.

In the way of constructive criticism, there were some grammar mistakes, but I'm not sure if English is a second language for you. I usually overlook things like that a little in those cases. Also, some of the phrasing seemed a bit off/strange, but not entirely distracting. I think it was because it was such an interesting story that

OH LORD! I wasn't going to review until I got to the latest chapter but this chpater practically killed me with laughter. As if Tezuka giving the birds and the bees talk the first time wasn't hilarious enough...you made him give a second time and added a stern reprimand for giving people drinks that COULD get them pregnant. The ending still has me laughing!

arguebly the longest and best data pair story i've read. good job on it ^__^ though it seems very difficult to write a good story with them.. im facing similar problems with a different pair =O=

GWYN! GWYN! GWYN! GWYN! GWYN!
OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!OMG!
THAT WAS SO CUTE~! xD
Awwe, data pair scene is so touching...xD
Yuina is so funny...lol
Asking that question...lol
OMG! I can't believe they sprayed tea all over the table...*well, I think every normal people will do that-.-;;*
lol~
I can't believe Ryoma drank it...lol
Gwyn! Write more!
This time, dedicate it to TezuRyo, please! *puppy dog eyes*
jkjk
lol~

OMG YANAGI! is he really dead??

I love this the most especially the last part. I'm still waiting for you Yuina's special chapter. xD

-Yuu

Awesome. Just...Awesome. You managed to answer just about all of my questions, and tell me about everything I'd been wondering about in that chapter... And threw in some complete surprises.

I like the flashbacks by Yanagi's dad... And enjoyed his wife's reactions from his point of view...

They're having a third child? Well... Good luck to them! ...(Great besides now being a raging Inui/Yanagi fan, I think I may be starting to like MPREG, at least given these circumstances)...

Echizen's pregnant? So the juice does work for others... Interesting News...

That's true about Tezuka character... I guess I'm just more used to Tezuka's character from ToL now, since I watched him grow up and evolve into that... It's really amusing here...

Thanks for updating! I love it!

god, I'm so happy you put up an extra story! I just love this story so much so thanx for updating! And I hope you'll be able to write Yuina's sidestory. Ja 'ne!

nice story but yanagi pregnant.. thats is just weird =O=

Lazy to sign in... xD

'Inui gave a slow sigh, looking mildly resigned. "I guess you're right." He gave a sad smile. "Sometimes, I do wish Sadaharu were here too though." '

Err...shouldn't it be Renji who gave a slow sigh? xD

-Yuu

...Wow, I actually went all the way to chapter 13 without reviewing again... Maybe because you kept leaving such cliffhangers that I wasn't willing to even wait the five minutes it would take me to review before finding out what happened next?

Anyway... Thank goodness you didn't kill Yanagi off. I was-well, nowhere near as upset as Inui when I read that, but I was still upset! Yuina is so cute! (And with two data masters as her parents, it's no surprise that she's a data master herself.)

Tezuka and Sanada are definitely hyper-protective/over-sensitive about Inui and Yanagi's relationship, aren't they? I had to laugh when they followed the other two into the kitchen...

I'm glad Inui survived Yanagi's parents wrath! I wonder how Inui's parents took the news...

Very well written. Please do incorporate this into Trials of Life!