And I thought I was the only one who could write like this.
Very well done! We don't get too many of these in Fanfiction and it was really deep.
I love this so:
Please keep writing!
Sayonara!

That was so deep ... I think I drowned. Great job. I'm curious to read the actual poem itself by Wallace Steven.
~morphy

they are very vague not really completely neji tenten...implied and mentioned once in a while...but i think the poetic aspect is too good

Wow... just, wow. That was probably the best NejiTen poem-thingy that I've ever read (not that thats a crowded feild, but still.) I enjoyed reading it quite a bit. Wonderful work! Ja!

That was deep.
Lovely choice of words.

much love
-jeni-

Nice, very deep, good job!