Great poem, but ht really does sound like part of a rap. I still dont get it. Why does she leave like that? Even though Dally warns her not to, and even though shes finally got everything right again? And how come Ponyboy passed out? That was a bit odd. Cant wa4t for the next one! -mod (alamodie IS my actual sn)

Another one? Woah this is getting intense!! This whole series is totally amazing. You make people consider the characters and just things in general in a totally different light. I dont mean this in an 'OMG ur so amazing!' way, im jurt saying it made me think, and it seems to me thats the you could ask for.

BRYON IS NOT LIKE THAT THAT IS SO MEAN I LOVE BRYON HE IS NOT A PERV HE IS A GOOD GUY

At first I was thinking Dally hadn't really died...but then I realized that he was a ghost...that made me sad. This was a really good story! I hope theres a sequel...maybe I'll check on your profile...

omg! omg! i love this story so much too! once again, great job!

Author's notes are against site rules, but I want to thank you for giving me a reason to report this pile of steaming crap.

I'm not going to go into the Mary-sueish, punctuation lacking, spelling errors, because I do not feel like going through each and every lousy chapter. Absolutely terrible.

is this the end? I think ponyboy should find out about stacy and johnny!

i've been with this story since you started it. may not have left many reviews, but... great story, great ending! was dally alive, or a ghost that flick and dusty could see?

that poem you worte is completely AWESOMEY (NO STEALING MY WORD) AWESOME!

This chapter was pretty good, if not a little short. Keep 'em coming!

dude so intense ! keep um' commin!

Dallas Winston did NOT have a sister! Why do you morons keep creating one?

Why not use Angela or someone that already exists in the book?

That's just stupid.

YAAY! You updated! I'm really sad though, because last night I read That was then, This is now for the first time, and it was the most horrible book I've ever read. I mean, what a depressing ending! Anyway... This is really good, as I'm sure you've heard countless times, but I just felt like saying it once more! Update soon!

Dusty and Flick ... that brings to mind a dry desert and the bully off of A Christmas Story. Neither are compliments.

Your spelling could use a good beta to check since Spell Check is obviously beyond your ability.

-Whenever anyone would call us by our last name, and if everyone "herd" it, we would all scream-

Herd is for cattle. HEARD is for the sense of hearing sounds.

As for the unusual clothing for your female characters ... it's not worth my time going into since many others have already informed you of the "dress a **, be a **" stereotyping of that era.

There is so much wrong with this chapter.

First of all, girls in the 60's were not part of gangs. Forget being affiliated with one -- they didn't even have any involvement. Period.

The name Dusty, especially for the 1960's, was not a girl's name. Try something like "Sue," "Sharon," "Evelyn," or "Betty." Generic names, but they work. If your OC was born in the 50's then that would a good name for her. Even if Dusty isn't her real name, it's just not something that a girl was called given the time period.

Her clothes are ridiculous for the time period. Girls were supposed to look "prim and proper." That excluded tight clothing, and jeans were hardly the norm. If anything she'd have worn a skirt or dress the reached the knee. No higher than that unless she was trying to ** the parents off. And then it'd have been three inches at the most. Even if she was a tomboy, girls still wore dresses.

You have a lot of spelling errors. "Where" and "wear" are two different words. Where is to ask the location of an object; wear is to put clothing on.

"Too" is to include something. Ie, "He came with us, too." "Two" is the number. Anything else is usually to.

"There" is the location of something. "They're" is a contraction of they and are. "Their is a possessive word.

Find a beta reader to look over spelling errors like these as well as punctuation errors.

oh may gawd...dusty and pony.
;]
haha.
-ASHLEY