LOL. Hate writing short reviews but hey, LURVE man, LURVE. X3

reow! NejiTen is ♥ and this just made it that much hotter. w00t!

Why does Hinata have to soe up their torn cloths they should do it themselves other then that it was fine

Yum. Short'n'sweet, not too much detail, and not too little. I liked it. :3 Neji's such a little horndog. -snicker-

My only problem? "When Neji felt her body tense up and her mouth open in a wordless cry, he arched his back and came with her."

._. I know how romantic it is for two crazy-in-love, horny kids to 'spurt their lovejuice' in unison, but the grave, grave unrealism about it torments my soul. Call me picky. -shrug- Just a touch of advice to keep in mind next time: avoid the clichéd duo-gasm. Realism adds to the fic. ♥ [Also, if you're going for a touch of humor, it's fun to have the guy have his first, and be like "xx; tired." while the girl's like, "... >>; You gonna take all night or what?]

-cough- Anyways. Good read, I enjoyed it. :3 I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. *bows* --Judo

It's good^^ You should keep going. I wanna read more NejiXTenten XD

i loved the ending.i have a feeling hinata's been fixing alot of tenten's clothes.

Well, it IS awesome! I really liked it! They're in-character! Yay for you!

In the words of Rock Lee -Gives the Nice Guy pose- good job, very good job indeed!

AWESOME. Romance and lemons go 2gether like ramen and Naruto!

HAHAHA! HINATA WILL FIX THEM! HOW NICE OF NEJI! ANYWAY, lOved the LEMON! WOOT WOOT!

Heheh, poor clothes. Getting torn and ripped up by a hormonal Neji. *shakes-head* He should be gentler with the poor, defenseless garments. Pretty good one-shot. Ja!

This fic is nice.. but.. *wails* its short! could you not make it longer?!? *sigh* niwei.. this was really a nice read...