make a ch two it chould be her in a fight by herself asking no one for help and wining

GREAT!! I think this is the best NamiZoro that I've read so far!
Please make a chapter two!!

BB21

lol!! this was so good! i cant wait for your next story to read!
~bye!
sincerely,
silver lone wolf

does he say ah dammit nami because he dropped weights on his foot or because he was fed up or something. i love it! ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER!

haahahha so funny lol dropped the weights from nami siting on his back? lol hahahaha hurry write more!

I would love to read further in this story!! Keep it going!

i loved it

That's Awesome...
The pairings and the equal balance of the characters was amazing...
do u plan on continuing this by any chance?
I LOVED IT ^^

nice story! ^^