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vazy
2008-08-21
ch 8,
abuseWoah! A-m-a-z-i-n-g ! I like it a lot, especially the parents part. I like your OC's to. They're very good ^_^
knb2328
2008-08-06
ch 1,
abusewow...this is good stuff
smilypie
2008-07-21
ch 8,
abuseYay! You updated! (yeah, I'm kinda late.)

OMG! Jaang went in the Avatar State! Aww! She loves Roku
Plot Bunnies Rule
2008-04-07
ch 7,
abuseWow, this story is so awesome, and filled with awesome...awesome-ness!! Love it! More soon!
Arysd
2008-03-09
ch 7,
abuseAww, this story is great. I can't wait to see what it grows into. =D
robyn
2008-03-09
ch 7, anon.
abuseYa!awsome story keep up-dating :)
oreobabysunshine
2008-02-11
ch 7, anon.
abuseyour sick you know that ? do something to Katara next something that he brother can't save her from ,ooh and make aang come back from the dead no credit needed just trying to make your story cooler

Smooches bye
supercoolcheerleader277
2008-02-11
ch 7,
abuseI love this story!! i cried when aang died tho
DuHSPaZZiNGFeL
2008-02-10
ch 7,
abuseI truly like this idea. It is very original. I mean, a war between benders and non benders? No one has thought of that before! It's wonderful!

I hope they get to tell Hana about their lives...that would be interesting, and what do the non benders think of the Avatar? Especially Aang, who stopped the 100 year war? SO MANY QUESTIONS! GAH! lol.
But this one question kind of stumped me...
If Sokka's a non bender, why is he a prisoner?
Shinobi Bender
2008-02-10
ch 7,
abusePoor Toph. Nice backstory for Hana. So how does that gas work? Does it perminantly take away their bending and will they get it back? As Zuko's reaction, not surprised in fact I found it rather amusing. Typical Zuko always yelling except this time without the flames. Update soon please.
Steph-DaughterOfTheNite
2008-02-10
ch 6,
abuseUpdate Soon!1
DuHSPaZZiNGFeL
2008-02-10
ch 6,
abuseExciting story so far!
And thanks for replying to me. I like when authors do that. XD

*watches you*
DuHSPaZZiNGFeL
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosh. You made me cry way more than I usually do with other tragic stories. That is really saying something. I definately have to read what else is going to happen. I am crying now, infact. I love Aang too. He's awesome...and Jaang's the new Avatar right? At first, I thought the baby would die at birth, but the whole Aang thing..I just started to break down from there. You are a wonderful writer. Keep it up!
Superbleh11
2008-01-15
ch 5,
abuseInteresting story you've got here, with some very interesting ideas. I've liked the twists as they've come, and I've liked the fact that you've created characters that are reflections of their relatives without actually BEING their relatives. Kudos for that! And your writing style flows nicely; you have a good voice and good phrasing.

I can't help but feel like the story is moving too fast. While it is a lot of fun to skip right to the action, it feels like we only stay in one place for a very brief amount of time. More description and a little more in the plot for certain moments can help with that a lot. Lol, in fact, I think more description in general would be really helpful!

I'm interested to see where you take this. Good job so far!
Aangsfan
2008-01-15
ch 1,
abuseNO! I LOVE HIM TOO! WHY! WHY! WHY! So I guess Jaang is the new avatar then, huh? That'll be fun.
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