less is more with your story. i crave more. poor tommy.

I LIKE!! lol PMS :)

Good job.Can't wait for more pms

Aw...poor kid, seeing his Dad like that. Great job dude!

-Zan

Love it.PMS ASAP

I'm still quite confused by what is actually going on here, but I guess that's why there are going to be more chapters. More information to come. Post More Soon Please!!

-Zan

This is quite, dare I say it...emo. Lol. Great job dude! Can't wait to read more.

-Zan

Good job pms

Hm...quite strange...but I'm intrigued. I wanna find out what happened to them. Post More Soon Please!

-Zan

HI!
Guess what?
I likke it!
INSANE?
THEY WENT INSANE!
OMG, I've got to find out what happened.
Can't wait for more.
Much luv:
Annie
Ps: It sucks about your computer. I've been the victem of many a hard drive crash.
Hope you get all your stuff back!

very veryy interesting. pms :D

Good job Pms