Awesome! That's the best one yet! I love it!

Oh wow, i loved this... Totally brought tears to my eyes, especially after the last episode...

Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with us!

Suzi

I really loved this story. I was rather floored by Rodney's efforts to give his life for Jeannie in that episode, and felt almost cheated by the fact that she didn't know. This was a great portrayal of her finding out, and I love the other details too, from the orange chocolates to the pony stable.

Very nice and I too want to see the pony stable.

Just wanted to add my kudos for this excellent story. Well written and the characterizations rang true.

This was wonderful - it captured what I pictured as Jeannie's questions after Miller's Crossing. She loves her brother no matter what, but she really needed to know what happened. This was a great way to tell it.

I just wanted to say how well done this was in terms of characterizations, tone and mood. I really enjoyed it. I wish they'd bring back Jeannie more often for precisely this sort of aspect to remind the viewers' of what the team is missing on Earth. And of course Rodney, er Meredith, could always use a ribbing!

Very good. I like your portrayal of Jeannie.

That was wonderful! Very enjoyable and very well written. It would make a great epilogue to the actual episode.

What a great story. I believe it must be a tag to "This Mortal Coil", though, not "Miller's Crossing".

I am glad to see this fic on I love the interaction between John and Jeannie. I like the comparison of Rodney and Jeannie and how John tries to read Jeannie by drawing on his knowledge of Rodney. But it is a good way to remind us that Jeannie is also a McKay and does share a number of traits with her brother.

OMG! This was excellent. I love how you've portrayed Jeannie here. I think it's perfect. The bit about the car was great..."Because I knew he had to do something. It didn't matter if I blamed him or not, he was still going to feel guilty."

One of the best Miller's Crossing tags I've read! Thanks for writing it.