OOPS!! I, forgot that Kurt will also soon get a special surprise from his mother when he returns to ORB when ZAFT attacks his second home, if you like please put this Mobile Suit in your fic.

ORB-02 Raiden

General and Technical Data
Model number: ORB-02
Code name: Raiden (Lightning)
Manufacturer: Morgenroete, Inc.
Operator(s): Orb Union; Three Ships Alliance
First deployment: C.E. 74
Accommodation: pilot only, in standard cockpit in torso
Dimensions: overall height 18.74 meters (standard version)
Equipment and design features: sensors, range unknown; Variable Phase Shift (VPS) armor; thrusters (same design as Gaia Gundam's)
Fixed armaments: Type 73J2 prototype twin beam saber, stored on main body, hand-carried in use; 2 x MSM5D 12.5mm CIWS, fire-linked, mounted in head; Model 71 defense shield, mounted on left arm,2 x MR-Q15A "Griffon" beam blade, mounted in knees
Optional hand armaments: Type 72D5 "Hyakurai" beam rifle, power rating unknown
Appearance: Same head design as the "Akatsuki", back thrusters same as the "Gaia" Gundams wings when in mobile suit mode but acts the same as the Fatum-01 backpack/subflight lifter like the I-Justice, same body Design as Infinite-Justice.
Color pattern: Same as the "Ninjato"

Pilot: Kurt T. Goescher

Also as a Note: Kurt, is also a secret member of the Clyne Faction as he grows suspicious of Durandal's dealings during spending his time in ZAFT.

I Forgot to put in a little history about Kurt's family, so lets start with his father:

Erwin R. Goescher: Famous battleship captain during the First Bloody Valentine War, Born to a noble family in Eurasia, follows the Code of Chivalry from the knights of old. Known famously as the "Protectorate Knight" for protecting civilian ships from getting blown to bits from stray shots and trigger happy Blue Cosmos fanatics. Met Yumi Taikeichi in ORB during a negotiating mission to bring ORB into the Earth Alliance. Capitan of the Agamemnon Battleship class "Plotava", named after the battle between Peter the Great of Imperial Russia, and Charles XII of Sweden. Killed in a training exercise when a stray missle impacted the bridge killing the entire command crew including Capt. Goescher. His last wish was for for his only son Kurt to carry on the Famly tradition of every member being in the military. Eyes: Green, Hair: Brown, Height: 6'1", Skin tone: Slight tan. Appearance: When Kurt comes back to Earth after the Minerva seeks refuge in ORB, revealed in a flashbck story told by Kurt and his mother, Yumi to Athrun, Durandal, Cagalli, and Talia Gladys. Genetic Type: Natural

Yumi Taikeichi Goescher: Intelligence officer, and CQB instructor for the Orb Military. Trained in Ninjitsu, and Kendo, and also trained in handling firearms. Born of a Samurai clan, and a Ninja family. Younger brother Hibiki trained in China to learn Kung Fu and passed it along to Kurt.
Met Erwin R. Goescher when he and an entourage from Eurasia came to negotiate for Orb to join the Earth Alliance. Hair: Dark Brown, Eyes: Hazel Brown, Height: 5'9", Skin tone: tan.
Appearance: after Kurt comes home from when the Minerva is hiding in ORB, and is relieved to see her only son is safe.
Rank: Rear Admiral CE 73, Capitan CE 72. Genetic Type: Natural

Hibiki Taikeichi: Capitan of the ORB Izumo class Battleship "Houshiyomi", and Uncle/Kung Fu Teacher to Kurt.
Went to China at 17 to learn Kung Fu, and also trained in Ninjitsu, and Kendo alognside his older sister Yumi. Greatly respected the Attha Family, and Lord Uzumi. Also took part in the Battle of Jachine Due when he, alognside his Brother in law Erwin, protected a convoy of refugee ships from harm.
Hair: Black, Eyes: Hazel Brown, Height: 6'0", Skin tone: tan
Appearance: After Kurt comes home to Earth onboard the Minerva with Yumi. Genetic type: Natural

That's a lot longer than I have anticipated, well hope this will be good for your fic. If not, oh what the hell. Thank you for time. GOOD LUCK!!

Rank: Lieutenant, Earth Alliance, ZAFT Redcoat

Name: Kurt T. Goescher, aka "Bushido"

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Genetic Type: Coordinator

1. Hair: Brown

2. Eyes: Hazel Brown

3. 5'11"

Allegiance: Earth Alliance then defected to ZAFT, then ORB

I Am: Mobile Suit pilot that causes slight trouble for the Heroes/Heroines but then becomes a Good Ally.

Personality: Smart, somewhat shy, bound to a code of Honor, compassionate, Hates LOGOS and Blue Cosmos, dislikes Shinn for his lack of compassion. Has a crush on Cagalli.

History: Joined the military at 18, through an military academy, graduated early at the top of his class. Born in the city of Berlin, Eurasian Federation. Commanding officer of a 4 man mobile suit team. Joined the Military because of father's dying wish (killed in a Training Accident). Studied Mil. History, trained in Ninjutsu, Kendo, and Kung Fu. Defected to ZAFT along with his Squad because of Blue Cosmos in the High Ranks of the Earth Alliance. Promoted to LT. for his skills and intelligence. Given the Redcoat title by Gilbert Durandal for his record.

Mother/Teacher: Yumi Taikeichi Goescher

Teacher/Uncle: Hibiki Taikeichi

Father: Capt. Erwin Rommel Goescher (Deceased)

Good: Always fights with honor and compassion, and willing to protect the innocent.

Pairing: Cagalli Yula Attha after she breaks up with Athrun.

Appearance: provides support during the operation to stop Junius Seven from falling on Earth alongside Yzak Joule, Dearka Elsman, and Athrun Zala as a team leader in his old, but no less lethal GAT-01A1 "105" Dagger Mobile Suit.

Mobile suit:GAT-01A1 Dagger "Ninjato"

Apearance of Mobile Suit: Black Head, Forearms, Shins, feet, and torso. Green Biceps, and Thighs. White face plate.

Strike pack mostly used: Aile Strike Pack, colored Black with green trimmings.


General and Technical Data

Model number: GAT-01A1
Code name: Dagger (aka "105 Dagger")
Unit type: mass production all-purpose multi-mode mobile suit
Manufacturer: Earth Alliance
Operator(s): Earth Alliance; civilians
First deployment: C.E. 71
Accommodation: pilot only, in standard cockpit in torso
Dimensions: overall height 18.00 meters
Weight: max gross weight 57.05 metric tons
Armor materials: unknown
Powerplant: ultracompact energy battery, power output rating unknown
Equipment and design features: sensors, range unknown; laminated armor (improved type of heat-resistant ablative gel DPX-30); hardpoints for mounting Striker packs
Fixed armaments: 2 x "Igelstellung II" 40mm multi-barrel CIWS, fire-linked, mounted in head; 2 x ES01 beam saber, stored in hips, hand-carried in use; 2 x 12.5mm anti-infantry gun, fire-linked, mounted in feet
Optional fixed armaments: see GAT-01A1+AQM/E-A4E1 Jet Dagger; GAT-01A1+AQM/E-X02 Sword Dagger; GAT-01A1+AQM/E-X03 Launcher Dagger; GAT-01A1+AQM/E-X04 Gunbarrel Dagger
Optional hand armaments: GAU-8M2 52mm machine gun

Technical and Historical Notes

Although the Earth Alliance was slow to catch up to ZAFT in mobile suit development, it manages to produce several prototype mobile suits, such as the GAT-X105 Strike Gundam. The GAT-01A1 Dagger is a mass production version of the Strike Gundam. Because of the Alliance's need to quickly introduce a mass production mobile suit to fight ZAFT, they instead produce the GAT-01 Strike Dagger, a simpler, stripped-down design. Afterwards, production continues on the Dagger (nicknamed "105 Dagger" after the Strike Gundam's model number). Unlike the Strike Dagger, the Dagger can use the same Striker packs created for the original Strike Gundam. In addition, the Dagger features EMP (electromagnetic pulse) shielding, a feature lacking in the Strike Dagger. The Dagger is also coated with ablative gel similar to the Archangel class battleships, providing increased defense against beam weaponry.

The Dagger's armaments include two CIWS vulcan guns, a pair of beam sabers and several hand-carried machine guns. The Dagger series enters combat late in the war and is assigned to ace pilots such as Morgan Chevalier. Morgan's GAT-01A1+AQM/E-X04 Gunbarrel Dagger participates in the Second Battle of Jachin Due, the final battle of the war. After the war, Morgan fights with Alliance defector Edward Harrelson's GAT-3 Raider Full Spec. In the postwar era, the Alliance introduces a slightly improved version of the Dagger, the GAT-02L2 Dagger L. Several new Striker packs are created for the Dagger L, which are compatible with the Dagger. Even after the introduction of the Dagger L and the newer GAT-04 Windam, the Dagger series remains in service and participate in the defense of the Alliance's Heavens Base supreme headquarters in Iceland during the ZAFT attack codenamed Operation Ragnarok.

we're approaching the one year mark of this being posted. i'm just wondering how it's coming along (a while back you indicated you had at least 2 chapters done and being reviewed.)

actually that reminds me i still need to design that new mobile suit for Lita Meada i told you about over the summer ^_^;

I'll get working on that, if you are in fact still planning on posting this. (i've got some ideas thought out but nothing finalized except for the suit's name and appearance)

sorry for not e-mailing this but i thought a review would be more of an attention grabber. (plus it's easier to do.)

Hey is it to late to b in ur story?plz reply soon tanks!

Rank : Soldier (Red uniform)
Name : Sora Hawke or maybe Fujiwara Mai
Age : 15
Gender : Female!
Genetic type : Coordinator (of course (:)
1. Mai - Pinkish brown Sora - Blonde
2. Mai - Purple Sora - Electric blue
3. - NIL - Only the norm
Allegiance : ZAFT, FAITH
I am : Soldier who protects all friends and innocent people. :)
Personality : Calm, goofy, clumsy, easily lost, hyperactive
History : Used to be Sora Hawke then fell off cliff while with lover and lost memory, became Fujiwara Mai. To protect those I love.
Good or Bad : I fight to protect the innocent and my friends. I follow my heart
Pairing: ME AND SHINN! p.s. make Lunamaria my bestie :D
Appearance : Shortly after Shinn arrives.

Hey all,

I've sent Phases 01 and 02 to my beta for reviewing and eventual posting. Can LiuBei1986 and IHateGirlsButILoveYou please contact me, because I have some issues to sort out with them.

Thanks!

Rank:ZAFT(red suit)Elite pilot

Rank: ZAFT pilot(red suit)

Name: Arjon Lee Yukawa

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Gender: Coordinator

1. Hair Color: Deep Black
2. Eye color: Bright Amethyst
3. Other: Slim Body, Flawless fair skinned(Kira's), full-sided bangs(from left to right),same height as Kira and Athrun. Drop dead gorgeous.

Allegiance:ZAFT elite pilot

I Am: A well trained mobile suit pilot that will cause hell for the heroes/heroines but sooner or later will be great Ally.

Personality: Not talkative, Expert to computers, specially in hacking Gundam OS, smart,gentle to a girl, optimistic, not losing hope, fighter, reasonable person.Being such a nice guy is really hard for this Character,Every girls in ZAFT seems to know this Character as very sweet yet kind person, gentleman...Hate guys like Shinn Asuka.

History: Pilot: Decided to be a pilot of ZAFT to protect the PLANTS from malicious mind, but he will decide that he'll join Orb forces for realizing his mistakes and to protect the one he valued the most, his Love to Rina Strife.

Good or Bad: A pilot who defects to the ZAFT forces to help ORB end the war.

Pairing:Rina Strife, (she's mine! get it)

Appearance: a scene of battle between ZAFT,EAF, and Orb Forces.A fight between the Infinite Justice, and that goes on and on...

Chapter: Whenever

Prototype Mobile Suit: ZGMF-X34V "Ragnarök"

::18.88 meters in height
::80.10 metric tons
::Ultracompact Hyper-Deultrion Nuclear Fission Reactor
::Variable Phase Shift Armor
::MMI-GAU27D 31 mm CIWS x2 , fire-linked, head-mounted
::MGX-2235 "Callidus" multi-phase beam cannon x1, torso-mounted
::MA-M02G "Super Lacerta" beam saber x2(sidebyside), stored on hips, hand-carried in use
::MMI-M15E "Xiphias 3" railgun x2 , folded underneath hips, spread out in use
::MA-M21KF combinable high-energy beam rifle x2, stored on hips, hand-carried in use
MX2200 beam shield generator x2
::MX2200 beam shield generator x4
::MR-Q15A "Griffon"leg beam blade x2
::composite shield (MX2002 beam shield x1, RQM55 "Shining Edge" beam
::EQFU-3X Super DRAGOON mobile weapon wings x8 (Each carry MA-100V beam assault cannon x1)
::HiMAT (High Mobility Aerial Tactics), equipped with modified "Voiture Lumière" booster engine
::Neutron Jammer Canceller
::Multi-lock Weapon System (Also known as Full Burst Mode)
::Wings of light System

!!a combination of Infinite Justice and strike Freedom, with Destiny features.!!

>>Ragnarök means the final destruction of the gods in a great battle against the forces of evil, after which a new world will arise.

>>Ragnarök "fate of the gods" < regin "gods" + rok "fate"]

Please Update soon! Im looking torward this! and for Ms. Rina Strife too.

=3

yo!

you know me alread, right?

Just change the name of my character.
Name:(before) Rina Yuki Campbell
NAME:(real one! and final) Rina Strife

wait...
I want to change my profile...ehe

Rank: none
Name: Rina Yuki Campbell(not relatives of meer, ok)
Age: 17 younger than Athrun
Genetic Type: Coordinator(a cute one)
1. Hair colour: Shiny Black (Silky, Long and straight...with bangs.)
2.Eye colour: Emerald eyes
3.Other: Creamy white skin, same as cagalli's height,very nice body(enought to get the attention of the boys in this series, but too big breast like Meer,..eww.wish that she's still alive so that my Character will drive her cazy with my Appearance,haha)
Allegience: Civilian; a student one
I am:a civilian turned into a mobile suit pilot.
Personality: Sweet, smart, fighter but not temperamental like cagalli, optimistic, but mysterious one too.
History:Civilian; because I will be the Bestfriend of cagalli-san who will soon help her to stop the War.
Good Or Bad: Good, 'cause Im Cagalli's Bestfriend
Pairing:A love triangle between me, Kira, and Lacus... some Athrun , but not as a lover, because theres something in my Character and Athrun that makes him my Older brother; no one knows about it though!"blood relationship"( One of the twist in your story, ehe!)
Appearance: I going to appear when the time Kira engage in real Danger, I saved him from death! and thats the beginning of my Role! (yeah, This character is inlove with Kira Yamato, twin brother of Cagalli.really InLOVE! but not Exagerated. she can keep her face calm when Kira is beside her. a little blush?can be.)
Mobile Suit: Her Gundam has a similar abbilities with the Strike Freedom and Infinite Justice, also to the Destiny(really that powerful? heeheehee)It has a wings like the Winged Gundam. It has Shining Pearl color, Gold Joints, edge of the wings have a Black lining color.
Fast! Powerful! and the names is...Winged-Serenity Gundam! woah..


Please I want to read your story soon...

Good Luck!

Rank: None
Name: Rina Atha
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Genetiv Type: Coordinator
1. Hair color: Shiny Black(long,straight,silky, & with bangs)
2. Eye color: Eye color: Green
3. Other ( like the height of Ms. Lacus and Ms. cagalli, nice body,enough for the boys to look... like the skin of Ms. cagalli.)
Allegiance: Civilian and (kind of Mysterious girl)
I am: A civilian turned into a mobile suit pilot.
Personality:Smart but quiet, (mysterious)
Good or Bad: Good Coordinator
Pairing: Befriend with Ms. Cagalli (as a best friend), had some connection with Athrun but he doesnt know about this yet. and for Kira and Lacus... there will be a love triangle.
Appearance: When Kira is in trouble, then Im going to show up there, piloting a mobile suit! saving him... its up to you, the storywriter, if what kind of mobile suit you'll give to my character... but i just want to have a powerful one, like the freedom,ehe.. too much?
Chapter: Its up to you... I want to look like a mysterious one... then suddenly Im going to be a...pilot! woah... I want to be a big Part of this story...hehe...

Tnx... I'll be waiting

Rank: ZAFT

Name: Aleksander Kolodziej

Age: 18

Gender: Male

Genetic type: Coordinator

1. Hair: blue, like Athrun's
2. Eyes: green
3. Other: same general body type as Athrun, but slightly more athletic and muscular

Allegiance: ZAFT

I Am: civilian turned mobile suit pilot (Junius Seven)

Personality: varies: depends on the situation, what he's goign through, usually a quiet, but calculating individual. If threatened, will respond with lethal force.

History: Had a family member who died in Junius Seven. Joined ZAFT immediately afterwards. Nicknamed the Blue Blaze. Pilots a modified GINN OCHER type, deep blue, with a black chestplate. Also has the Blade gundam: essentially a replica of Strike, but pure silver phase shift. Three equipment settings are:

AirBlade: Blade with an Aile pack
GunBlade: 2 320mm Agni hyper impulse cannons mounted on shoulders
350 mm gun launcher
ShieldBlade: various shield equpiment
two antibeam shields on forearms
shield platform-replica of Forbidden's equipment,without the beam deflection

Good or bad: Good

pariring: whatever you feel is right

Appearance: whenever

here is another character (and i am thinking of making more)

Name: Zuben Adamski

Age: 27

Gender: Male

Genetic Type: Coordinator

Hair: Raven, short only going as far back as the middle of his neck

Eyes: Green

Other: in appearance he is a real pretty boy, pale skinned and slender

Good/Bad: Ruthless as a battlefield commander (has a you start it, we’ll finish it attitude) but not a bad guy

Pairing: that’s up to you

Appearance: during the fall of Junius 7

Allegiance: ZAFT

I Am: A ZAFT commander, leader of the Adamski team consisting of 3 Nazca class ships The Einstein, the Edison, and the Galileo. I command from the Galileo. Despite being in ZAFT I have absolutely nothing but contempt for Chairman Gilbert Durrandal and I do not trust him in the slightest, I use my position as a high ranking officer to get close enough to keep tabs on him through various means. Though I rarely sortie I am a capable MS pilot.

Personality: Calm, well mannered and respectful but naturally a very suspicious person. It takes a lot of effort from any one to win his respect or trust. If he is ever attacked by enemies he has a no one gets away alive policy and if he is the one on the offensive he will not retreat as he believes all people should finish what they start since he is a strong believer in seeing things through to the end. (This is taken out of his hands if he is fighting under someone else’s command)

History: He comes from a very respected and wealthy military family living in the PLANTS. He joined ZAFT as part of the family tradition of military service. His father taught him everything he knows about war including his policies about fighting. The Adamski team used to be under the command of his father until the battle of Yachin Due when his father’s ship was destroyed by the EA vessal Dominion after they began retreat because of the first shot fired by the Genesis super weapon. He inherited his Father’s fortune and command immediately following the end of the first war. He was horrified at how corrupt the late chairman Zala was and for fear of the future started using his family’s financial resources and contacts to establish a small private network to keep tabs on the PLANT’s chain of command especially the new Chairman, Gilbert Durandal.

Mobile Suit: he pilots customized units designed for ZAFT commanders. His units are specially equipped with a MS sized decorated fencing sword with anti-beam coating on the blade.

Rank: Lieutenant

Name: Hanna Wynski

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Genetic Type: Coordinator

1. Dark Green Hair

2. Grey Eyes

3. Tall n slender X), Pale, No spectacles

Allegiance: Zaft then Phantom Pain

I Am: A mobile suit pilot who's going to cause hell for the heroes/heroines

Personality: Double personality(sadistic&normal), Easy to get along with, Likes to flirt :P,

History: Coordinators murdered parents to force her to join ZAFT. Hated ZAFT, eventually faked death n defects.

Good or Bad: A zaft red uniform pilot who defects to Phantom Pain to help annihalate the coordinators although doesnt like naturals..

Pairing: Auel

Appearance: Chapter 3 onwards. Appear dreaming when age of 10 when parents were killed. then wakes up from nightmare when comlink beeps..

Chapter: Appear in every 3 chapters throughout? Hanna faking death. Joins PP. Fight against main char & talk some politics with em. Succeeds in destruction of one of 3 plants colonies. War ends n Hanna disappears, no one knows where.

More people, as requested. Have fun /_^

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Rank: Lieutenant Commander
Name: Tanya Cartwright (real name: Mackenzie Thatcher)
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Genetic Type: Natural
1. Hair color: Red
2. Eye color: Green
3. Other: 5'6", pale, always wears sidearm whether required by regulations or not

Allegiance: Phantom Pain, The People's Republic, Orb

I Am: A civilian turned soldier turned spy

Personality: Quite friendly and relaxed but also gifted with great determination and focus

History: Hailing from a hardline Blue Cosmos family, Tanya became estranged from her family because of different ideals. Realising that the best place to hide from her family was the military, she enlisted in the EA under an alias. She was assigned to the Combat Coordinator program after basic training. She was "recruited" (wink wink) by Akira Chang for his intelligence network while working as a supply clerk. After the program's termination, she continued to work undercover. Tanya was later given command of Phantom Pain's supply division and promoted to Lieutenant Commander because of her past security clearances and efficiency. She uses her position to pick up any information regarding Phantom Pain activities. While she did not receive training in mobile suit combat, she is an expert pistol marksman.

Good/Bad: Good

Pairing: Attracted to Akira Chang despite his reluctance to be romantically involved with anybody

Appearance: Whenever it seems best

Chapter: She will come in contact with her brother and there will be a firefight involving the two plus Chang. In the end, she either follows Chang or leaves for Orb.

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Rank: Commander
Name: Elliot Thatcher
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Genetic Type: Natural
1. Hair color: Brown
2. Eye color: Green
3. Other: 6'0", lightly tanned, right eye is nearly blind and is missing ring and pinky fingers on right hand

Allegiance: Phantom Pain

I Am: Extreme Blue Cosmos soldier skilled in many areas

Personality: Cold and hard at all times with an emotional wall

History: Tanya's older brother is a hardline Blue Cosmos member. Unlike his sister, who went to a boarding school in Europe, he attended Cromwell Military Academy and became was commissioned a Lieutenant upon graduation. Elliot entered the fray late in the war as a squad leader piloting a Dagger L and survived the both Battles of Jachin Due. After the war, he applied to become a test pilot. However, his piloting career was abruptly cut short when a systems malfunction aboard his Windam caused several explosions in his cockpit. After two fingers and most of the sight in his right eye, he pulled some strings though family connections and was assigned to Phantom Pain. There, he took command of the Nelson-class battleship Eisenhower and it's contingent of Windams. He is widely known among the EA mobile suit corps as an experienced soldier and an acomplished mobile suit tactician. He harbors extreme hatred towards his sister, whom he feels is a traitor to the Blue Cosmos cause.

Good/Bad: Bad. Very Bad

Pairing: none

Appearance: I'd like him to appear during the nuclear attack on the PLANTs.

Chapter: He'll survive the debacle at the PLANTs and make his way back to EA territory. After that do with him as you like, but I'd like him to find out about his sister's double identity and be involved in a huge gunfight with her and Chang. He'll die in the end without letting go of his hatred.

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Sorry about the delay but I had to make these from scratch. Let me know if you want any more specific types of characters.

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