Oh I forgot this. Hikari can go into seed mode and her gundam suit is white, purple, and gold. The angel has a nuclear canceler and is very agile. It can also make a big blast that draws from the nuclear energy inside of it. Free to do whatever weapons you want to do to it.

What? No way! I mean, he's really kind and there's no way for the nice and good one to die. Aww... I hate that idea. Seriously... he didn't deserve to die. Oh, for the character that I sent before, she's really shy person, but she can get along with all pilots and her pilot suit is blue and pink. She also had the ability to go SEED mode if she went extremely angry when someone try to damage Archangel.

Hey great to see you finally posting this story! I still have to read the chapter but his short one caught my eye first.

Kill Kira?! Hm... Okay well as a die hard Kira fan I am totally against this, but I can't deny that removing him from the battlefield would allow for more focus on the OC's especially since this is an OC based fic and according to the bios most of them seem to end up on the side of ORB and the Archangel in the end.

His death would blunt my interest in this fic, and while I would prefer nothing happen to him, I would compromise by having him receiving some major wound that incapacitates him from all battles after Operation Angel Down, or battle of ORB. For instance during the second assassination of attempt on Lacus he takes that last bullet instead of Meer and becomes paralyzed or is in critical condition or something. Or his injuries from the Freedom's destruction are much more severe and he is unable to pilot from that point on. (this would be the best option since even I'll admit he came out of that explosion way to lightly) He could then serve as captain of the Eternal alongside Lacus, allowing Waltfeld to get more use out of his one hit wonder Gaia Gundam. Another option is have him get captured by Durandal at some point, and imprisoned until he is rescued at the end of the fic.

The choice is of course up to you, but think carefully about why you would want to kill him. Is his death a necessary trigger for the OC's? Or is it just so he does not steal all the action away with his superior abilities?

Unless the plot demands that he dies (which it sounds like it doesn't since you're still toying with the idea) Disable him, don't kill him. You'll get him out of the spotlight and keep all the Kira fans from chasing you with pitch forks and burning torches.

Good Luck! (sorry for the long winded review) I'll be interested in your decision!

I forgot to add, my last name is Irish, so I gave myself a Japanese last name. Thought it would be cooler.

Sorry, I've been too lazy to log in and comment.
Anyway, about your idea.
I think it's fine as long as his death is planned out correctly and does not seem to be written out in a rush.
Because despite all the anti-Kira people, you have to admit that he had a big role in the SEED series and readers will only accept his death if it makes sense.
Take for example, you can't just have some random character kill Kira off because that would contradict Kira's character as the Ultimate Coordinator. My suggestion, would be to go with something surprising and yet when you really think about it, it's believable.
So surprising, that even though us, the readers, know that your had always intended to kill Kira off, we'd still be surprised and mourn his death.
I don't know if my opinion is good enough, but I just thought I should share my thoughts.
Although, I think the feedback from the people whose character are somehow related to Kira's are much more important because Kira's death will influence their characters as well.

Hope this helped. (:

Forgot, I am the one who is Shinn's twin.

I also am 18 for my age and here is more of my past.

After her adpoted father lost his legs in an attack, he asked Sarah to join the ORB army which she did. Her hair is brown by the way. After the academy, she became a well-known pilot, achieved the rank of lieutenant, and joined the Archangel crew.
4 years passed since the day she had joined and she has reunited with Shinn, but they both are enemies. Shinn has no idea he is fighting his twin, but can Sarah convince him that she is still alive?

Pretty new idea, and it'll allow Shinn and Athrun to become different.

I'm really sorry! I didn't know about the deadline and I just found the story. I have been thinking about my Gundam Seed character for a long time and how to include her in the story. This would mean the world to me if you included my character in the story and not kill her off. Please.
Name: Hikari Otori
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Genetic Type: Coordinator
1. Hair color Dark Brown Wavy
2. Eye color: purple
3. medium height african american and japanese
Allegiance: Nobody but herself
Personality: smart, very outspoken, very happy, really good friend, mean streak when you do something to her friends
I Am: a mobile pilot that was a civilian until age 14
History: Grew up in the plants. My father and mother were the scientists who created Freedom etc. Plants killed them and took the credit for it. I survived by jumping into my parents new gundam the angel. I vowed I would destroy Zaft for what they did. I knew Athrun and Kira growing up.
Good or Bad: I am good but I fight with only those who will end the war/ destroy Zaft.
Pairing: It would be my dream come true to be paired with Athrun!
Apperance: I would like to appear in the early middle. Whenever Athrun and Kira have a hard time fighting alone or when they are fighting each other I come in and help out. I am very experinced pilot. Good as Kira, but Kira is a little bit better. Thanks. Please consider my request. I think you idea of doing this is great!

i like the idea go for it

Sarah NishiKama

Gener:Female!

Gene: Coordinator

Eye golden color.

Faction: ORB and good guy. she wears a golden and blue and white and black pilot suit and had her hair tied back and it goes down to the middle of her back.

she pilots a Murasame that has been upgraded to fly at faster speeds and can go SEED.

Outfit is white shirt with blue pants. she wears red and black shoes, and is a very skilled pilot. Shinn's twin sister.

Past: Sarah was separated from Shinn at birth and was adpoted by the Nishikamas. Now an ORB pilot, she will fight anyone who tries to kill her and her brother. She is friends with Cagalli and is always willing to fight those who do not agree with the laws. But when she goes seed, never mess with her!

haha! bold and new!I like it! sounds intersting!

It has begun! Great start with the characters and action. Can't wait for more!

Whoo~ It started. I'm already itching to read more.
Like, rawh, rawh, rawh.
It's interesting to see how you introduce each character and stuff.
XD
Hope the next chapter will be up soon. (:

Rank: Ensign
Name: Clarissa-Anne Constantine (nickname: Anne)
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Genetic Type: Coordinator
Hair Colour: Black
Eye Colour: Blue Grey
Height: 168cm
Allegiance: ORB (alongside Archangel), Terminal

I Am: A mobile suit pilot who piloted Astray in the previous war. The female Astray pilot that survived in the final battle and been transferred into Archangel under Erica Simmon’s suggestion which been approved by Captain Murrue Ramius.

Personality: Quiet but friendly, prefers to sit in the mobile suit for adjusting Mobile Suit OS. When battle, quickly becomes serious and quite unpredictable in the battle (but not crazy). Not quite much a talker, but she's in good terms with all Archangel crew

History: Her family was died during the war which forced her to live at ORB with her uncle, Leonardo Constantine. She join the military for the hope that she can defend ORB. Since Earth Alliance attacked ORB, there’s no way for her to believe ZAFT, Earth Alliance or the Seirans. She also hates Blue Cosmos and Logos as she believes of what Lacus Clyne fights for is meaningful. She also seeks the world's peace without war.

Good or Bad: She becomes pilot who got transferred into Archangel and have a chance to fight alongside the hero of First Bloody Valentine War, Kira Yamato. Moreover, she fights for ending the war that happened for a long time.

Pairing: Athrun Zala (If not, it's fine to be alone.)

Appearance: When Minerva reached ORB for the first time and come together with Murrue Ramius for meeting up with Talia Gladys.

Chapter: Any chapter

oh yea forgot, recieves the AFMS Raptor after several engagements with the Minerva appears and its mobile suits prove to be difficult oppenents.
AFGATx-122 Raptor- Transforms into a fighter, armed with high output beam rifle,160mm rail gun that fires depleted urianium sabot rounds (after several shots can render phase shift armor near useless)looks similar to tallgeeses cannon, two head mounted vulcans, 2 beam sabers, shield, 10 heat seeking missiles, Silver in color