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Reviews For: Angell of the Night

RavennaNightwind
2008-05-03
ch 6,
abuseYa! I LOVED I. i hope you update again soon!!
Kavi Leighanna
2008-04-02
ch 2,
abuseIf it makes you feel any better, IMDB still credits her as "Jennifer Angell". And I fully agree that Jennifer is better than Jessica.
greyslostwho
2008-03-05
ch 2,
abuseWhat is the woman's name? I'm confuzzled...
Great story though. lol
Aphina
2008-02-27
ch 5,
abuselmao! those two are so silly, it's nice to see them having a bit of fun though esp with the job the way it is!
aeriefaerie
2008-02-19
ch 4,
abuseI loved this chapter. Honestly though I'm quite surprised how fast Angell said "I love you". I wasn't sure how long they have been dating, so I'm going to guess its been a while for her to say those things plus to stay the night at his house consistently. Otherwise this was a great, eventful chapter. Angell past is coming back to haunt her so I find it really interesting. I'm kind of interested in her back ground in this story. I do wonder though is this story mainly on Angell? Or is it on the relationship between her and Don. I'm just wondering because I can't quite figure it out myself. Anyway great chapter and I can't wait until the next one. Don't worry about not updating fast enough also. We all have other stuff to do, and even to do this is a lot.
RavennaNightwind
2008-02-18
ch 4,
abuseAwesome story! I love Flack/Angell stories. I was so happy when they gave Don a possible girlfriend. Very interesting. I can't wait for another update!
aeriefaerie
2008-02-07
ch 3,
abuseSo instead of leaving a review each chapter I'm going to put it all in this one :]

For chapter one I love how you start the story where both Flack and Angell aren't sure about the relationship they're embarking on. It shows that their is backstory to their past and their uneasiness about each other. It's really hard to write a story with character with such undevlop backgrounds. But then again there is the oppurunity to be creative.

Chapter two was just too cute. Angell really seems like that person that will offer a shoulder to cry on. Like during Happily Never After, when she asked Danny how he was feeling. I really enjoyed the fact they held hands in the coffee shop and didn't stop.

Chapter Three I have to say is thus far my favorite chapter. You give a great backstory to Angell's past and why she is so unsure of getting into a relationship with Flack. I love the reference back to the picture, in fact I was wondering if you were going to explain that. Bravo. I also enjoyed the scene where they are eating burgers and milkshakes. It seems something Flack would do. Always food, all time, everytime. Haha.

Overall I love where you're going with this story and this pairing. You don't see too many of Flack and Angell fictions, but its starting to increase, espcailly when the great chemistry they have on the show. Bravo! I can't wait until the next chapter of this story. The plot thickens each time and I love it.
Aphina
2008-02-07
ch 3,
abuseI really like where your going with this, i liek the way you've ddecided to step off the canon and show us another side to Jess.

I noticed a few spelling mistake nd after reading the little bit at the bottom I know your talking a big step out of your comfort zone so I was thinking, would you like me to beta you?

i don't usually offer but I really love your story and i can feel it going somewhere so you'd like a beta to read over some of your stuff before you post it or to go over a few plot ideas i wouldn't mind giving you a hand.

Back to the story, I really loved the begiinning of this chapter, it was sweet to learn that they had taken that step forward, and Don's franticness while searching for her showed he really cared. i am really interested in what Tom will do next.
Aphina
2008-02-07
ch 2,
abuselmao, I was exactly the same I think everyone thought it was Jennifer! lol I agree with you, reading and writting ff reminds me of the work I should be doing.

Back to the chapter. I thought this was really sweet esp the way you showed how she helped Flack handle the probs with danny and Ruben. I adored the whole subway thing and I'm racing off to read the next chapter!
Aphina
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuselol i really loved this. I was absolutely adament when Angell first came along that her and Flack should get together. About the whole Devon thing? I think the show has progressed enough to maybe hin that Flack and her aren't an item anymore, i think it was a passing fancy.

Back to the story. i really enjoyed reading it and would love to se more Flack/Angell fiction!
bad2wolf2mcgee
2008-02-06
ch 3,
abusei'm really liking this please put more up soon!
Tigerkat51
2008-01-27
ch 2,
abuseWhere did you find out it was Jessica. I agrre; Jennifer suits her better. I think you should stick to Jennifer, it fits perfectly. Love your story keep writing!
Horatiofan101
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseHI!
I have read your story, and loved it! Flack/Angell are the new it couple of CSI:NY! I just watched "All in the family", and their is so much chemistry! much more than D/L will ever have! I hop you write more Flack/Angell stories, and keep up the good work!
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