I love it so far. I really hope you update soon! Great start =D.

yay! im lovin your story! i love the idea of rachel and alec. im a big fan of meghan ory

please continue this please!

I haven't been watching the show this long, but i like the story so far.
Oh, and (My computer is being stupid and wouldn't sen the last review), Dark Angel comes on SciFi Tuesday nights.

"Damn there were times he wanted to tie Biggs to a pole on top of an ant’s nest just dripping in honey."

Hehe, this is great. Nice start, I'm interested to see where you take this.

I'm liking the idea behind this. Good start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. :-)

This starts as a fun a light story to read. I don't really follow the part in italics about the familiars. It just seems random and out of place and sticks to the show in that sense of Max being this saviour.

I personally really like the Berrisford Agenda. I don't think it is really necessary to like the episode to enjoy this story because it puts more of a fact to the name for then anything for the lead characters because I think your version of the people are very different from the show. I think that episode really showed us what being shelter from the rest of the world had on the transgenics. It also gives us an idea of how Manticore was run.