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| Lord's Girl Forever 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseThe baby offered a wide yawn before she shoved her whole fist in her mouth. “I like your thinking Aebii, but that is not a tactic that will lead us to success.” I'd say not :) |
| Nelarun 2008-03-29 ch 3, | abuseAww... this was so cute! adorable! I love it! Nela |
| The Dancing Cavalier 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuseaw. that was a delightful and enjoyable well written story. Thank you for coming up with the idea and takiing the time to write it. I can see quite clearly obi-wan making a good father even in his early life. I love you potrayal of qui-gon and obi-wan in the story, they are both perfect. Keep up that fantastic work!! |
| amber75 2008-02-01 ch 3, | abuseWell, I'm certainly ready to read the next story! Thanks for writing! |
| amber75 2008-02-01 ch 2, | abuseObi-Wan is quite the little leader in this. I love how he basically ordered Qui-Gon to take the baby while he fought the head protestor! That made me laugh! |
| amber75 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a very good story, so far. I don't know how I missed it! Ah, Obi-Wan taking care of a little baby! So cute! Loved how Obi-Wan used his brains as well as the Force in fighting the protestors! |
| DarthNasere 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseThat was a great ending |
| EragonPeep 2008-01-22 ch 3, | abuseNO! Oh well. It was a good story and I encourage you to write about what you were refering to at the end of this chapter! PLEASE! Great story! EP |
| EragonPeep 2008-01-22 ch 2, | abuseAwesome!! Keep up the good work! EP |
| EragonPeep 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! This is such a good story!! I like it how they relate...sort of..! Keep up the good work!! EP |
| 2Bornot2b 2008-01-22 ch 3, | abuseI absolutly loved this story! Thanks for posting. I hope there is a sequal. |
| Ann Jinn 2008-01-22 ch 3, | abuseWell, keep me in mind for that other day when the two meet up. Great job with our little lady growing and Obi Wan growing into a knight and master. Thanks for writing the epilogue. Good job with the ending of the tale and the cliffie at the end. |
| MagRowan 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseDah! How could you leave it like that another story bit?! Now I want more! :D Excellent epilogue in any case. :) No worries about the misposted chapter. It happens. At least all of it was there. ^_^ And yes, I am a fan of many fandoms, even Star Wars. I'm just a crazy reader. :) Thanks for another enjoyable story! |
| Nimloth4th 2008-01-20 ch 3, | abuseVery, very nice story! I would really like you to continue writing here! |
| Angel5000 2008-01-19 ch 3, | abuseMy dear Ginger...you had better write us another story with Obi and Aebii. Otherwise I might have to threaten retribution. I might have to threaten to cancel my planned trip for England next year. I just might...so you really ought to write us a story. ;) :) |