wo! tentacles! i love the gate! and its tendrils we. i love you so traumatized! i wish it had an alternate ending where he stayed >w< just thinking about it makes me shiver in delight. what if ed loves the gate too but denies it XD kawaii!

-_- I...LOVE YOU! ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU! For FOREVER I've been looking for a tenticle story with Ed and I finally found one! E! THANK YOU! Oh, read my fics.

SQUE!

Man, that Gate was sure creepy.

*shudder*

Favourited! it's something different!

this...kind of reminded me of the ring 2 (not the rape part!)
going to make a 2nd chapter?

O.O

O.O

Oh My God...

I knew what tentacle rape was... Yet I... XD Oh shit, that was awesome! So Ed was so traumatized, he would never attempt alchemy again... Poor Ed.

Ed: O.O What the fuck... -faints-

See ya!

This was awsome! I didn't understand it, but it was hot! I really don't like gay porn too much, but this is really very good writing. GREAT JOB LAURA!!

Wow... That was hot. Loved it. What I didn't like was when Ed said "I love Winry", but the rest of it was good.

Poor Edward. O.O

I wasn't sure what you meant by tentacle porn (I knew what it meant, but I didn't know what would be the tentacle part of it). Then I read it and it was the gate and I just let out a huge "OH!" -laughs at self-

Anyways, great story. I love your Parental!Roy, since most people tend to make it easy to switch from parent to lover. Your version was clearly defined, and I wasn't picturing RoyEd or RoyAl.
You did a good job of keeping in character too. I suppose some will say that Ed crying was OOC, but...come on! He just got raped! I doubt he's going to act like his usual self. Thus, he stayed in character.
The gate kind of made me giggle...I don't know why. I suppose it was the gates assumption that visiting four times meant that Ed loved it.
Again, awesome job! :D