If this is the Chozo-made Powersuit, the helmet should not break. The armor has shielding and no damage is done to the suit itself until all the shielding is gone. I don't think Starscream could have drained 10+ Energy Tanks, and break a Chozo-made visor, when said armor's weapons caused such a significant amount of damage, and all its technology and the hunterships seemed unknown to everyone there.


Just my opinion. More than that, I like this very much. =)

Isn't Samus a girl?

The End?

No. Samus must return! So must Ridley! And Shockwave must share Samus' memories with his team members. Even though this was a mostly Transformer story, I loved how you made Samus the bounty hunter. May i suggest for a sequel more Metroid elements? Like Phazon? I wonder what Phazon would do to a Transformer...

This story needs something. A sequel. I love how you basiclly told the Transformers NOTHING about Samus, but I think she should be back so they can learn more about Space Pirates. And Phazon. Transformer+Phazon=?

-SPOILER ON SAM- OMG its Chozo and Mertoid blood, because the Chozo needed to blend their DNA with hers for her to survive on Zebes! Which is the reason Samus Aran has superhuman abilities! And her powersuit!! *basks in Metroid fandomness*

Aw,you're ending this? But i wanted to see some more! Oh well...

Great job...I hope there will be a sequel in the works!! :)

So it is over…

I can´t believe you put up 28 chapters. The entire fic went so fast, really enjoyable.

I´m glad I read it. A good piece about Starscream´s origins is always welcomed, and yours was very interesting, because you not only dig into those origins, but in Starscream´s personality. I bet there is no fan that doesn’t question once in a while about why their favorite characters are the way they are, and I bet Starscream is on the top of almost everybody´s list.

Oh and I loved the “Skywarp to the rescue” part! Mh, what I would´ve given to be in Silv´s place! Can be a cliché, but many of us dream to be saved by a tall, dark and handsome Decepticon warrior!

As for Starscream and Megatron, I loved how their relationship continued in that respect/hate side. They just can´t help it. They are too different, always challenging each other, but at the end there is some of respect underneath all the sarcastic remarks and the violence.

I hope you will write the sequel. You can´t write an ending like that and not doing it ;o)

Thanks for the reading. I really enjoyed your story.

aw! I don't want it to end! *cries*

lol, loved it, the ending ws excellent...but...ack! leaving it THERE!? my brains gonna be constantly going 'what if?' and 'omg! lookout!' now...
lol, :P kidding, good job, I really enjoyed this story ^-^

Sequel you have to write a sequel PLEASE :) i want to know what Silverblade has done with Starscreams Spark PLEASE "puppy eyes"

Hex ;)

A great end, liked me.

Thunder, should think, after the shot of the leather jacket to the wall that: should not make a hunter anger, less if is woman... and angry :D

You did a decent job with the fight scene.

I bet that the Decepticons in the hallway would be in a monent of utter shock when they see Starscream actually saving megatron by helping him to safety. They would likely be so dumb folded they would wonder what happened to Starscream here.

Very good chapter. The fight went pretty well, and Starscream finally meeting his demons and proving Silverblade he is not a coward anymore was very satisfying to read.

I also loved how Starscream helped Megatron at the end. They can hate each other, but there is a line they would never dare to cross. Somewhere inside that line, there is some respect to be found.

oh...

Wow! great battle.