Nice lil one-shot and I don't usually say that about one-shots. Now...ON TO BOOK 2!

I don't think it's possible for you to write anything I don't like. Awesome job!

Pretty in-depth outlook inside Takato's mind after Guilmon's deletion. Reading this I really feel sorry for him. Good job! :)

I agree with you on one thing; without reading Hazard's Sorrow and A Time to Heal, one might say that Rika is OOC, but after reading those her character is spot-on. I'd like to think of her maturing as she grows older.

lol Sorry took so long to review i got sucked it to another RPG

it was good but it the end seem a bit OOC really . Why would Rika Biomerge just to sing to him?

"For the Heart I Once Had", by Nightwish.

"Heaven today is but a way

To a place I once called home

Heart of a child, one final sigh

As another love goes cold

Once my heart beat to the rhythm of the falling snow

Blackened below, the river now flows

A stream of molten virgin snow

For the heart I'll never have

For the child forever gone

The music flows, because it longs

For the heart I once had

Living today without a way

To understand the weight of the world

Faded and torn, old and forlorn

My weak and hoping heart

For the child, for the light

For the heart I once had

I'll believe and foresee

Everything I could ever be

For the heart I'll never have

For the child forever gone

The music flows, because it longs

For the heart I once had

Time will not heal a Dead Boy's scars

Time will kill

For the heart I'll never have

For the child forever gone

The music flows, because it longs

For the heart I once had..."

I couldn't find a better fitting song...not to mention that curiously I was hearing it why reading it...

Sakuyamon will always be Takato's guardian angel! I loved it! Yet...I wish you could do a Herny/Takato friendship one-shot to go along with this!

Great work nevertheless!

Your writing is as deep and intricate as ever, and these one shots simply add to the mystery of what is going to happen in the central plot.

Keep on writing!