 Birth of Venus 2008-01-15 . chapter 1Aw, that story was nice and cute! ^_^ Nicely done! The only complaint I have is that the formatting was a little akward to start off. The introduction was really short, and the "Flashback" title was in bold, so I instinctivly started reading the flashback. but other than that, I really enjoyed this! Natalia and Asch are so cute! Keep up the good work! |