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| Curuchamion 2008-07-18 ch 1,  | abuseSomehow Walter always seems a little bit like a butler... a cute butler. Yeah, I found this from Jackwabbit's faves too. Good work! |
| chrisVIII 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuse^^ I found your story in JackWabbit's favorites and I'm going to add to mines as well. I so love the way o'Neil talks with "ah" and the scene is really easy to picture. Those few lines are brilliant: (...) Walter smiles and says "Missing offworld travel, sir?" Jack fixes him with a very serious stare and says "I don't know what you're talking about, Walter." "Of course not, sir. (...)" |
| Ladybug Jess 2008-02-23 ch 1, | abuseHehehe. Funny. Love the humour. |
| Proud to be an X-Nerd 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI always hated (still do) the fact that they took ** the team, and then the show. :) I'm forced into only reading FanFictions to hear anything interesting with him in it. Not that I mind though, expicially when the fics are as fun as this one. It would be cool if you ever did an actual story about what happened to them, but this was fun none the less. Good work. :) |
| BettyHall223 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuseFunny! |
| princesssfiona 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI loved this little ficlet - great little read. Cheers fi |
| Harm Marie 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseI love that Walter caught on to his sigh. |
| Little Miss Delliham 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! ah such humor! this has some of the best dialogue ever! i find this most exellent! thankyou for making me smile! :) ~Del |
| Devilish Me 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseHee hee, that was great! |
| Nighthowler 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseAmidst the angst, the romance and goodness knows what-all - don't get me wrong, I devour that, too! - it's a joy to find an author who gets the humor of SG-1 along with everything else. And dialgoue! Love me some wicked dialogue! Being a veteran reader, I have learned to protect my keyboard from projectile coffee, soda, etc. Though, with this gem of a story, it was a close-run moment. Leave it to Daniel to get lost in a melee... Well done! |
| mjm 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abusebiting and throwing sand? You missed pulling hair! Great story. More chapters would make my day/week/year/century. (hint hint) |
| 7 League Boots 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! Carter in hand to hand then besting a tyrant - all in an SG-1 day's work! Or week's work. A lovely capture that would fit Season 8 canon just right. Nice work, great read, thanks. |
| jackwabbit 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI don't review a lot, but this one cracked me up! Good show! |
| Latergatr 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseJust another day at the office, n'est-ce pas? Great humor. "There's another General, isnt' there?" ROTFL! Loved it! |
| Eilidh17 2008-01-14 ch 1, | abuseVery funny...a great time had by all. I love Jack's witty remark about Lee failing to get anything useful out of the DHD. You wrote everyone perfectly. Any chance of writing up the fight scenes? I suspect they would be hilarious...especially Daniel's! |