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| AutobotStarlight 2008-05-11 ch 2,  | abuseAww. Poor Gene. Another awesome chapter. Can't wait for more. |
| AutobotStarlight 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseThis was so cute. I love the kiss at the end. Very sweet. |
| Lugian-Holly Before Swine 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseAww! The first chapter did move really fast, but it was very cute:3 And the second chapter makes me want to cry. Which isn't necissarily a bad thing.xD --Lu |
| purplehaze95 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseyou were definitely able to capture an outcasts feelings in the previous chapter and this chapter was just as delightful. I love the way you described every last detail. SUPERB JOB :D! |
| purplehaze95 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusethis is AWESOME! i love it so far...i wonder what will come next :). |
| endiahna 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseIt isn't finsihed is it? I can not help but wonder what will happen...LOL, I found the book sad and this is sad too. But good! |
| pedal 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseI recommend reading how they actually met, in the short story "Phineas" off which ASP is based. You writing is good, but the story itself is a bit fast. Very cute, though. |
| PercyandCassandra 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseWell. That was...georgous. Completley and totally beautiful. Not a fault in it whatsoever. That was perfect. Thank you for writing this. |
| spider wench 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusegreat i love it. one thing. take your real name OFF. |
| SexyPurpleBunnyRabbit 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseI think that it was wonderfully written. everything. The detail...emotions. The only problems for me were 2 things: 1. They didn't seem like Gene and Finny...I dunno. Just different people. and 2. It moved pretty fast Just minor things, you see? Because it truly was an awesome story! Is this a one shot or no? |