whoa! any chance of an update?

please finish i love the story

Hey I just discovered your story and I really enjoyed reading it. I was wondering if you were going to continue writing it?

really good

come on how can u write something like that and leave me hanging omg i want more!

OMG, I just reread this.
Please update soon, I really want to know what happens.
You're a very talented writer!!

update ASAP! I'm dieing here!

Wow LOVE it! Everyone is in character, and the case is great and realistic, can't wait for more! Good luck !

i hope that you continue this sotyr soon great beginning...cant wait to see if dinozzo is the father...

wow. that was really good story. i'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next so please please please update it!

wow... amazing! i truthfully did not think i would like this but i love it! hurry and update!

Very well written and I cannot wait to read more! I like the cliffhangers :), and all the little hints.

Love this chapter, however I am hoping that Tali is Tony's. Maybe Ziva just thought it was the other persons and she is actually Tony's. Sigh... Love the Gibbs discussion about rule 12 with Tony. Please update soon. I will get my kleenex ready just do not let Tali, Ziva or Tony die.

“You see this is why rule twelve exists.”

Tony was confused, “to keep me from screwing up?”

“No,” Gibbs exclaimed, “to keep me from talking with my team about their love lives!”
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this scene was awesome! really, i could actually picture this scene in my head,...just awesome!

i think your story is really great, little bit sad, that Ziva went away from DC and back to Israel and that Tony doesn't know about Zivas "little" secret,...but i really wanna know how this will go on!

i dont want to push you but please update SOON!
im very curious about your story =)

that was awesome...really starting to love this fic...keep it up and update soon