lmao that is a funny story I hope you finish it...

update please

I love it so much!
I think it's the funniest story EVER to exist!
Can't wait for more!

O.O ...*burst out in laughter* that was FUNNY love it more please

I see it has been quite a while since you have update :P
But I really hope you will continue this ! :)

dudde im scared. ahaha. please update ;D

lol

when yo gonna finish the story?
and if that was just advil in her system then why did Alice smell Acid on her breath?

XD XD XD LMAO LMAO!! This is beyond funny XD You just made my morning! (It is before school right now) Update soon! Crazy/strong/fast bella is hilarious!

plz right more this is hilarious

i feel so bad for the clerk

YA! mee likey thAt story!

please please continue the story

awesome story!

haha. poor people of forks... update soon, please!