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Reviews for: Pretending to be Human
yaoi-is-wowie21
2008-01-30 . chapter 1
xD Dude, when I realized that a whole lot of fandom prefers chocoholic!Remus, I was like, "Aren't you not supposed to feed chocolate to dogs?"
I love how you write young!Remus; he's so adorable, the way he tries to fit in and everything. Nice job.
ProtegoNox
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
Very cute! I tend to think Madame Pomfrey probably forcefed chocolate to Remus after the full moon to help him get his strength back, so he wouldn't want to it much other then when strictly necessary. :D
Ame Mika'zuki
2008-01-21 . chapter 1
*grins* I like your take on nonchocoholic!Remus and the reasons behind his forcing himself to eat it. Thanks for the great read!
emuroo
2008-01-20 . chapter 1
This was nice and original. It is definitely true that the number of stories where Remus liking chocolate is a major point is really large, despite the fact that it never seems to be supported.
Marauder's Mad
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
I really liked your story ! It's an original way to see Remus, not a chocolate-addict for once in fanfic !
I liked his wrestling to pretend he's a perfectly normal human, and all the questions he's wondering. And the special attention Sirius is giving him...
I hope Sirius doesn't become a chocolate-hater too once he can change in Padfoot, if dogs are afraid of this food !
A very IC Remus, as ever. :)
discombobulated.shoe
2008-01-16 . chapter 1
I've often wondered that myself, but I like rabid-chocoholic!remus for some reason (probably because of my own love for it). Anyway, it was interesting to read a fic in whcih Remus hates the stuff.

I really like how you portray Remus (and the other marauders) in their first year. In my opinion it's really spot on. Oh and I also like Sirius' story about his mother (that poor dog!) And. If I told you every part I like I may as well copy and paste the whole thing into my review :D Great stuff!
K. Chambers
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
I liked this- nice idea with his whole trying to fit in. Good job!
truest-of-true-loves
2008-01-14 . chapter 1
I really liked this. it has a nice flow to it. I like how you just got into the timeline. a lot of people start at the letters to hogwarts and how they all meet, but you just jumped right into it. I liked it. I can't wait for the update to see how it all developes. good luck!
remuslives
2008-01-14 . chapter 1
that was really good. and makes total sense as well. oh man! 'chocolate-covered Brussels sprouts' ew! that's disgusting! i love the vomit scene and how peter almost lost it too. hell i'm still laughing about it just remembering. great story and very unique!
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