This is a very cute tale. I love how so many people see the same reasons that Shego works for Drakken as every one else. I mean the guy's an idiot.
-Kate

WOW. Very good. It flowed nicely. I deffinatly liked how its going now.

Hey, cool start. I usually don't read Kigo unless it's quite good, and you do it really well.

Keep the good writing.

It was pretty Good. But it did seem rather rushed. And there were some mistakes but seeing as you said english is your second language you did really good there :)
I would be willing to help you out if you want. Just let me know and I'll see what I can do.
Well I am now off to bed... I just noticed the time... My brother's will be waking me up in a few hours O.O

Becky Silver Black

Well this had some flwas mostly on the fact that it seemed rushed and unplanned but I WOULD like more granted if the characters and storyline inprove that is.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.