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| DarkAngelKisses 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseWell, I think it's special. Therefore, you win at life. Also, I can already tell I'll be laughing my arse off all through this. (Little Red Riding Hood happens to be my fav story to mess around with). :reads to fourth paragraph: :dies laughing: Hard-knock life, eh? “My grandma might slaughter you, no offense.” Well, that's good way to get rid of non-essential characters. Or not, as she follows. 'The moment he crossed that border, it started raining.' Ha ha ha. “What do we have here?” That's not cause for alarm or anything. His best mate = Fran? Hm. I smell a conspiracy brewing. “Well, I’ll fix that later, now get in a closet!” I am giggling hysterically, just to let you know. “I’m the Big Bad Wolf, Vaan!” 'Here to plunder you-' :smacked: Oh hello, Basch! :waves: '-Boy Who Cried Wolf.' What? :O 'And so, Vaan was kidnapped by Balthier, where they did weird, gay things together.' Cheers to that! 'That’s a nice word for COMPLETELY KILL CHILDREN’S FAIRY TALES.' S'okay; nothing is sacred anyway. :3 |
| Firey Chronicles 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseYou could be the script writer for Shriek XD |
| King Mana 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuse...you shouldn't be ashamed... But it seems to me like you were on crack XD. |
| Ranchdressing 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOh. Just oh. Wow. This is some funny shit. But poor Vaan, getting butt-raped by big bad Balthier. |
| sailormulti01 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseR-O-F-L dude... ROFL!! XD |
| Vulpine Ninja 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseMAN BRAS FTW! |
| Blood-Smeared Shuriken 2008-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was insane. ...which was probably why I liked it so much. XD I now want an English panther. |
| soleilnoire 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is HILARIOUS! I actually could not stop snickering to myself out loud. Which makes for awkwardness when you're in the same room as half your family! XD I loved Balthier trying to add 'eth' to every word. lol. “You think so-eth?” ahahhahah, I can't stop giggling. |
| fuki-chan 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuse... Freaking brilliant! I could not stop laughing the whole time I read this. |
| RuneMoon 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseI never knew what Reks looks like, and I thought the description is just a joke, but I googled his image and it really does fit the descrip. What the hell were they thinking, LMAO. Hilarious story with the Reks Vann bickering~ |
| viciouscallisto 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat the fuck?! that was awesomely funny. i enjoyed it!! |
| Megan 2008-01-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was hilarious! Just one thing though: "“Red is such a tacky color when associated with my clothes…” he muttered, slipping it on and hoping no one notices him." It should actually say "hoping no one would notice him". But apart from that, it was really good. I haven't seen any other parodies of Red Riding Hood, and this was really funny (unlike a lot of 'parodies'). :D |