 Fran 2008-10-22 . chapter 6 NICE I like IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK i HOPE THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE BETTER |
 amayhun 2008-06-27 . chapter 6so, so, soory! i didnt review...AWESOME CHAPTER! it was just, amazing!! great work, cant wait for the next one!! |
 dragonsrullllz 2008-06-19 . chapter 6awsome |
 cheng 2008-06-10 . chapter 5whoa that's crazy. |
 cheng 2008-06-10 . chapter 4ahahahaa sweet. |
 cheng 2008-06-10 . chapter 3ahahaa don't worry iit was iinterestiing! |
 cheng 2008-06-10 . chapter 2hahaa niice chapter. very iinterestiing by the way. |
 cheng 2008-06-10 . chapter 1cool chapter. |
 Lord Archeron 2008-04-30 . chapter 6I guess we can allow you more time... JK. Yes you may have more time, but the chapter will be amazing. I still think tidus should have the powers of Bahamut. That would be really cool. |
 Peaceful Dragon Rose 2008-04-30 . chapter 6okay |
 Lord Archeron 2008-04-16 . chapter 5This is an interesting story. This is the first FF Fanfic I have read. It is good. Update soon please. Just one question...
Does titus have the power of Bahamut? Can he summon him? |
 daianapotter 2008-04-11 . chapter 4O.O i didnt know that one person can kill other only telling him/her too much information O.O |
 daianapotter 2008-04-11 . chapter 3“okay well we better leave you alone you two :D” said Rikku giggling.
“Oh, please Rikku grow up a little” said Lulu.
Oh, please Rikku dont listen her, dont listen her =) |
 daianapotter 2008-04-11 . chapter 2yes Zanarkand *.* i really like your story^^ continue it plz =) |
 daianapotter 2008-04-11 . chapter 1"I-I was thinking about the future- ack!" said Tidus while trying to stop the now **-off Lulu.
"Lulu please if you continue choking Tidus like that he and I will not be able to have children with him, because you'll kill him"
"Okay, but if he try to make something to you I swear I will-" said Lulu with a maniac look in her eyes and with a knife in her right hand.
"I-I understand Lulu, but you don't have to look at me like that and with that knife in your hand specially with the knife" said Tidus with a scared tone of voice.
this was great xD.
i hope you wont be too bad with Tidus^^ |