|Reviews for Apathetic|
| everythingsklaine-nothinghurts 12/21/10 . chapter 1
Minty-chan- *nods furiously* I liked it!
Yaoi-san- It was cute _ Poor L, feeling guilty...
| XJhoker 3/19/10 . chapter 1
Good job I liked it L x Mello rulez (L)
| Tinuviel Simbelmyne 5/4/09 . chapter 1
I love L Mello :D
I liked your story, thanks!
| Sexykill69 8/18/08 . chapter 1
Aww...I liked it..It's hard writting for the two sexiest characters in death note...and really akward to write cause I always feel like a pedophile after ward...*I never post my LxM stuff* Good work!
| Kerink 3/7/08 . chapter 1
I loved it. It shouldn't have been M though.
There aren't many L/Mello fan fics, so I really enjoyed it.
| ObsessiveCompulsive5699 1/21/08 . chapter 1
that was...different...but i liked it! you portrayed them well
| xKradxxHikarix 1/18/08 . chapter 1
Yum... I like it a lot...
I honestly didn't think the dialogue was too much. At the end, there was hardly any dialogue at all, so it balanced out a bit. Or so I thought. _;
Love the portrayal of L and Mello as well.
Nice job, Toshi.
| Keehl-River 1/16/08 . chapter 1
it was good.
| l0onyl0opylupin 1/15/08 . chapter 1
Your take on L's and Mello's relationship is different from mine and therefore interesting.
I love THIS: They'd know where his hands had touched. And then he'd be undone.
I love it so much.
And you. So much.
I am delighted by the surge of LxMello fic. Thank you for being one of the people contributing. It makes me so happy that I feel lame for feeling quite so happy, if that makes sense. Ridiculously happy, you might say. And I should really shut the hell up and go to bed now.
| Ainahim Twilightbait 1/15/08 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness I loved this it was sexy. Your portrayal of Mello should not have been as attractive as it was HEEHEE. The dialogue fit between them very well, I thought. Very very nice! *FAVORITES*
| AlmightySponge 1/15/08 . chapter 1
It's great, I love it.
| MessyJessie 1/14/08 . chapter 1
Aw this is so *reaches for word other than cute...* cute!*homygawshimsoarticulate!* I mean ah... well yeah I liked it! I love your ending-just about every MelloxL story I find has L just using Mello and loving Light or something like that but this one doesn't! Great job _