| Reviews for Apathetic |
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everythingsklaine-nothinghurts 12/21/10 . chapter 1Minty-chan- *nods furiously* I liked it! Yaoi-san- It was cute _ Poor L, feeling guilty... |
XJhoker 3/19/10 . chapter 1Good job I liked it L x Mello rulez (L) |
Tinuviel Simbelmyne 5/4/09 . chapter 1I love L Mello :D I liked your story, thanks! |
Sexykill69 8/18/08 . chapter 1Aww...I liked it..It's hard writting for the two sexiest characters in death note...and really akward to write cause I always feel like a pedophile after ward...*I never post my LxM stuff* Good work! |
Kerink 3/7/08 . chapter 1I loved it. It shouldn't have been M though. There aren't many L/Mello fan fics, so I really enjoyed it. |
ObsessiveCompulsive5699 1/21/08 . chapter 1that was...different...but i liked it! you portrayed them well obsessive |
xKradxxHikarix 1/18/08 . chapter 1Yum... I like it a lot... I honestly didn't think the dialogue was too much. At the end, there was hardly any dialogue at all, so it balanced out a bit. Or so I thought. _; Love the portrayal of L and Mello as well. Nice job, Toshi. |
Keehl-River 1/16/08 . chapter 1it was good. |
l0onyl0opylupin 1/15/08 . chapter 1Your take on L's and Mello's relationship is different from mine and therefore interesting. I love THIS: They'd know where his hands had touched. And then he'd be undone. I love it so much. And you. So much. I am delighted by the surge of LxMello fic. Thank you for being one of the people contributing. It makes me so happy that I feel lame for feeling quite so happy, if that makes sense. Ridiculously happy, you might say. And I should really shut the hell up and go to bed now. |
Ainahim Twilightbait 1/15/08 . chapter 1Oh my goodness I loved this it was sexy. Your portrayal of Mello should not have been as attractive as it was HEEHEE. The dialogue fit between them very well, I thought. Very very nice! *FAVORITES* |
AlmightySponge 1/15/08 . chapter 1 It's great, I love it. |
MessyJessie 1/14/08 . chapter 1 Aw this is so *reaches for word other than cute...* cute!*homygawshimsoarticulate!* I mean ah... well yeah I liked it! I love your ending-just about every MelloxL story I find has L just using Mello and loving Light or something like that but this one doesn't! Great job _ |