I love it!

Very attention-grasping. The story is very intriguing, not to mention comical. I like the characterizations...and I think I like this Sesshoumaru who grins better. Kagome's friends are also highly amusing.

This Egypt-theme in fanfiction is a first for me. And I am quite taken by the way you incorporated the original story into another time and setting. It reminds me of the wonderful works by Shannon Hale. The ancient setting just spices up the romance, (the sands, the blazing sun, the shimmering river, the soft moon, the sexy costumes...) and I love it!

Although I would suggest letting Inuyasha and Kagome get to know each other more and not let the physical attraction be the only kind of attraction between them. The reader will then know that Inuyasha loves Kagome not only for her body.

Otherwise, the story is really wonderful. Like an epic story. When I first started reading it, I could just picture Inuyasha riding through the city in a motion picture, with the adventurous music in the background and everything. And Kagome dancing too, I can so see it in movie form.

I am also curious as to why you chose particularly Ayame and Koharu to be in the quartet? It is an interesting combo, and in a good way. The characters actually goes quite well together and I have no difficulty picturing them interacting with each other.

I am planning to read the other wonderful Inuyasha stories you wrote, and maybe even the Harry Potter :) And might I comment on the outrageous amount of reviews you have! Wow! Must be quite some collection of stories you've got here. Can't wait.

Great job on this fic, and I look forward to reading more!

Wow. So far this story is really amazing. I have read other stories that you have written and you are an amazing writer and I really hope you update soon I'm dying to know what happens!

Poor Rin I hope Fluffy isn't to hard on her...

Anyway, Please update soon! I'm not really sure how long I will have my computer for and I would really like to finish reading this story before that :)

ONEE! It's been so long! I miss you! I haven't read in forever! I'm at work so I have a good internet connection. I am loving this story.

-gasp- rin is gonna be punished?! O.O i can't wait til the next chapter! ^o^

nice please finish

Loved the Chapter, Loving The Story. KUDOS!!

Ah, it's been a while... things are really starting to heat up. It seems that life has taken the better part of you :) Don't worry, that happens!! I would say update soon, but I rarely read soon -_- Haha!! ^_^

LOVE THIS PLEASE WRITE MORE

lovely!

OMG!! Please update soon!! Your stories are so good!! You are such and amazing writer!! Please write more!!

Please update. I can't wait until the next chapter!

Awesomeness. :D How do you get all these ideas anyways? You're very creative. Never fails to amaze me. Update soon please!

O I can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon!

please continue this story. I REALLY REALLY like it.

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