That was so very wonderful and eloquent, and the length was just right. Didn't even notice there was no specific narrator until the end. I think I love you a little XD

Very nice! It almost seems more MattxMello than LxLight, but maybe that's cause I just read a bunch of Matt'n'Mello. Or because I've come like that pairing better.

Still, it's written very well.

I love this. Really good.

O.O OH MAI.

Normally I am not one for vulgar language, but... damn, this piece of literary artwork was amazing. You are such a fantastic writer, it's incredible how well you paint these words with such meager things as keystrokes. The speaker... no, the speaker in these is best left undefined, and I shall not aspire to discover who it is, or, perhaps, it is no one at all, and by choosing to not place a name to the identity, I am correct in my guesswork? Ah, but, all stray thoughts aside, this story was truly inspirational, absolutely beautiful, and should you ever write a book and publish it, do tell me, and I shall be one of the first to buy it, for anything of yours must be fantastic. Lovely, lovely, lovely, thank you, thank you, thank you, and, as always,

Love,
Misfit

oh...god..i'm crying now..

this talk of light and shadows reminded me of a saying i once heard, that the brightest lights always leave the darkest shadows

it almost sounds like something lawliet would think? I donno' but it made me sad.

Ah... I read each line TWICE just to find a clue on who the speaker is. Obviously it proves unsuccessful haha, but that's why this fic is so wonderful. Love~

I loved it!

Very nice. I liked the concept a lot. To me, it didn't matter who was narrating: it worked both ways. Good one-shot.

Incredible. Just incredible. You don't even know who the speaker is, and yet you've managed to get so far into thier relationship. You are incredible.

Who the speaker is...Well, a couple parts of this sound like Light, but mostly feels like L.

lovely.

sounds like L
really quite beautiful

beautiful. :) Sounds like L speaking.

good job